Cool track.. It is a flawless production for what it is.. but to be hyper-critical.. I would say that the vocalist is singing it with a lack of emotion & passion.. like reading off a script or something
The overall theme of the track could be either sad, happy, or dreamy.. but it feels like a little bit of everything mixed into one, know what I'm saying?
Having said that.. it is an interesting track because it makes you think to yourself 'what is this guy even feeling'. or it could just leave you frustrated -_-
Interesting... I looked at the genre before beginning to type, and I my instant reaction was to wonder what made you choose "dub" as a genre. This reminds me more of modern electronic styles, rather than a reggae and dancehall influenced style. I am not much of a genre nazi though, so I can forgive that. This song does have a pop sensibility which I can appreciate. It is not something I would usually listen too, but I do listen to and create a good amount of dub, which led me to the confusion. I like that the final product has a good dynamic range, and the frequencies are well represented. Possibly the vocal parts, when the music gets more sonically dense, could be more present, however this is pretty minor. It is especially minor when considered with other prominent songs in the style. I like what you've done here!
35s in it at starts to get very interesting. The sound is great. Personally I think the drums are what is going wrong for you. Too dubstep / halftime and not more traditional banging bass drums and hi hats. My Opinion. Keep up the good work though. https://www.looperman.com/users/profile/1879052
Ok, It's a great track overall. The first build is just there. I really like the percussion work although it gets a bit repetitive as you progress through the song. I don't know much about chill and what it's really supposed to sound like but it was kinda simple. I felt like I was listening to the same synth pluck throughout the song. The last drop nailed it though. You have a good direction with this track and with a little high end EQ work and a little filler it will be good.
Decided to give your track a listen!! I am genuinely surprised, quality is great, drop is great, never knew I was a fan of this type of music until I heard yours lol
Yea so maybe a lil bass and work on the mixdown a bit. It's a lil loud but I guess I can blame the loudness wars for that. Otherwise very nice arrangement and synths used. Keep em coming
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Thank you!
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The overall theme of the track could be either sad, happy, or dreamy.. but it feels like a little bit of everything mixed into one, know what I'm saying?
Having said that.. it is an interesting track because it makes you think to yourself 'what is this guy even feeling'. or it could just leave you frustrated -_-
I'm sure we can figure something out, I guess the confidence grows over time? =D
About the theme, I felt the same thing, will try better next time!
Thanks bro :D
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Also, thanks a lot for feedback!
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Feel free to share!
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Thanks for your time :)
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I'm actually planning to do a new version of this track, it will sound similar but with different melody, percussion, sounds.
About EQ, I will buy ATH-M50Xs next month, so expect better quality.
Thanks again
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right now i don't have any rap songs on youtube so....
Email me nktshrd1234@gmail.com
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Well i can rap in punjabi if its k with you...
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Thank you for the awesome comment! :)
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This IS kinda cool.
Dont know how to help you cause you did it right :)
Now do the rest and i will love it
Excelent work, sound, mix and freshness
stay tuned
joe
I will definitely focus more on this project now, I will make sure to post it here when I'm done ;)
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I will try to do my best, I'll be sure to finish this one >:D
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great work!!
I'm really happy that you like it, I will definitely try to finish this project if you like
Thanks again!
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Gramo/Neo
Yeah, I'm trying to add some bass, adding some other synths and sounds as well.
Thanks for commenting, have nice day/night! ;)
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The only real problem is the lack of a good sub-bass.
Fortunately, that's an easy problem to fix.
Yeah, I'm working on it.
And thanks mate! ;)