This is interesting work. I didn't think it was that cinematic at first but then changed my mind the more I listened to it.
Your dry lead synth is a pretty cool, delicate sound. Then we have a reverbed tight, gentle drum beat that makes me think of hip hop. And some stuttering little bits of what might be vocals.
0:57 there's something slightly awkward about the key change (difficult to explain). But all the elements there are good. And I like the drop at 1:26 back down into the main groove. Maybe your drums should be a bit louder as they kind of get a bit buried. But they have the reverb on them so it would make sense if they took up more space, with the non-reverbed instruments kind of sitting underneath/within them. Not sure if that makes sense!
1:31 maybe some "wrong"/atonal notes there. Makes it a bit darker.
2:17 I love that lead, hanging note!
I think this could be very effective soundtrack music for tracking a busy but chilled out, emotive scene.
thank you for taking the time to listen and give constructive tips! I think I understand what you mean about the drums and reverb, although im having a difficult time hearing the key change you talk about, even though I made this, I guess my ears are just less sensitive. Overall I was going for a macro feeling and Im very curious what you would say about my track called Driven, about to upload it. Its a bit of the same and exactly the things you say may also apply there, so please :) Thanks again for taking the time and peace out,
Leo.
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This is interesting work. I didn't think it was that cinematic at first but then changed my mind the more I listened to it.
Your dry lead synth is a pretty cool, delicate sound. Then we have a reverbed tight, gentle drum beat that makes me think of hip hop. And some stuttering little bits of what might be vocals.
0:57 there's something slightly awkward about the key change (difficult to explain). But all the elements there are good. And I like the drop at 1:26 back down into the main groove. Maybe your drums should be a bit louder as they kind of get a bit buried. But they have the reverb on them so it would make sense if they took up more space, with the non-reverbed instruments kind of sitting underneath/within them. Not sure if that makes sense!
1:31 maybe some "wrong"/atonal notes there. Makes it a bit darker.
2:17 I love that lead, hanging note!
I think this could be very effective soundtrack music for tracking a busy but chilled out, emotive scene.
Well done.
Leo.
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The dissident notes kinda push it to the other side for me, but
overall it's a good piece... :-)
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on Crystal by FreeJudge
Nice pulsating melody, great work
Favorite right away ;)
Greetings RB
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Afteral I much appreciate short and concise pieces and this one certainly is.
Compliments____Orlando