This is interesting work. I didn't think it was that cinematic at first but then changed my mind the more I listened to it.
Your dry lead synth is a pretty cool, delicate sound. Then we have a reverbed tight, gentle drum beat that makes me think of hip hop. And some stuttering little bits of what might be vocals.
0:57 there's something slightly awkward about the key change (difficult to explain). But all the elements there are good. And I like the drop at 1:26 back down into the main groove. Maybe your drums should be a bit louder as they kind of get a bit buried. But they have the reverb on them so it would make sense if they took up more space, with the non-reverbed instruments kind of sitting underneath/within them. Not sure if that makes sense!
1:31 maybe some "wrong"/atonal notes there. Makes it a bit darker.
2:17 I love that lead, hanging note!
I think this could be very effective soundtrack music for tracking a busy but chilled out, emotive scene.
thank you for taking the time to listen and give constructive tips! I think I understand what you mean about the drums and reverb, although im having a difficult time hearing the key change you talk about, even though I made this, I guess my ears are just less sensitive. Overall I was going for a macro feeling and Im very curious what you would say about my track called Driven, about to upload it. Its a bit of the same and exactly the things you say may also apply there, so please :) Thanks again for taking the time and peace out, Leo.
Commented on name it yourself by FreeJudge
The intro snare felt very under produced.. give em some life... Why has the track been filters like that?
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
very cool song I defiantly can see this has a music bed in some one's cinematic work. Also a very cool mellow song to chill out with, good work
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
Hello. I have not seen your name on here before.
This is interesting work. I didn't think it was that cinematic at first but then changed my mind the more I listened to it.
Your dry lead synth is a pretty cool, delicate sound. Then we have a reverbed tight, gentle drum beat that makes me think of hip hop. And some stuttering little bits of what might be vocals.
0:57 there's something slightly awkward about the key change (difficult to explain). But all the elements there are good. And I like the drop at 1:26 back down into the main groove. Maybe your drums should be a bit louder as they kind of get a bit buried. But they have the reverb on them so it would make sense if they took up more space, with the non-reverbed instruments kind of sitting underneath/within them. Not sure if that makes sense!
1:31 maybe some "wrong"/atonal notes there. Makes it a bit darker.
2:17 I love that lead, hanging note!
I think this could be very effective soundtrack music for tracking a busy but chilled out, emotive scene.
Well done.
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
Sounds like you had fun doing this, short but sweet piece...
The dissident notes kinda push it to the other side for me, but
overall it's a good piece... :-)
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
nice subtle changes throughout. you create a very beautiful, delicate sound. like dew on a spiderweb reflecting morning light. nice work.
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
Totally agree with the comment below.
Nice pulsating melody, great work
Favorite right away ;)
Greetings RB
Commented on Crystal by FreeJudge
Nice little tune...from 0:58 onwards it's absolutely great!:)
Afteral I much appreciate short and concise pieces and this one certainly is.
Compliments____Orlando