Intro vocals definitely have an Ozzy feel. Kudos on having the balls to put it out there. I like the writing here and everything seems to work in the structure. The only issue is the low end is way too loud and crushes everything else. When your waveform is a solid block like it is here, you are too compressed and it sounds pretty bad. Again, your writing is really good and I don't want to dissuade you from continuing, just need to make a small adjustment. I hope this helps a bit.
on Un-Become by Xenicbeatz
on Un-Become by Xenicbeatz
Intro vocals definitely have an Ozzy feel. Kudos on having the balls to put it out there. I like the writing here and everything seems to work in the structure. The only issue is the low end is way too loud and crushes everything else. When your waveform is a solid block like it is here, you are too compressed and it sounds pretty bad. Again, your writing is really good and I don't want to dissuade you from continuing, just need to make a small adjustment. I hope this helps a bit.
Evan
on Track 9 by Xenicbeatz
on Track 1 by Xenicbeatz