Venuslove

I like the beat!

smooth track! good job

chill with a nice easy groove...sounds good to me Venuslove...the minimal mix works good with the up front drums...Ed

I really like what you have been doing with this idea project. Like watching one of those older movies, how the scene changes constantly yet all tie together. Hear like 3 different songs you could make out of this one. Nice. thanks. Peace.

Cool track, the vocal thing works for me

Nice mix of sounds, interesting atmosphere surroundings and environmental changes. Sounds great for some retro type of media entertainment. Keep up the cool sounds. Peace.

This is great VL!! Never got the hang of Ableton Live but you make it sound ez ha good job! I dig your style. May I colab with you on this?

Yo! This is not bad actually. Def got me listenin rookie ha. Like how you used the loop, I would go about it like that too. Those claps in the beginning grab ones attention the drums following it come in pretty strong and grooving when the flute comes in but you stopped it too soon ha. I do like that switch up after it tho. Could def use more of these sections throughout. That breakdown synth was nice, unexpected but nice. I can imagine the beat coming back with more power after that. Do you need some more loops to add to it?

Also check out what I did with that same flute loop. I need a vocalist for that story but Im not sure if anyone would dig it enough to try at least.

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/172520 - uses the same flute loop in a similar way as you did.

Yo what's up venuslove, this isn't bad, I do feel although that maybe if you humanized the drums slightly it wouldn't sound so robotic, maybe it's because you didn't finish the song out yet, but you could still give it a shot, I only say this because I feel like acoustic drums should always be humanized at least slightly, peace out...

this actually reminds me of autechre a bit, which just so happens to be my favorite band of all time.
But yeah, as has been said before by others, its nice but its a little TOO chill.
Need more action, i feel like some punchy drums would definitely do the trick.
punch me in the face XD

alternatively, it would probably sound just fine if you just upped the tempo a bit, might not even need anything else.
Course, theres a lot of things possible here, which only says its probably going to be epic when its finished.
good luck to ya

i have update my track with yours. you should try listen and tell me what you think, and if you want me to type you name in title in a other way.

i like it best when the beat dropped. but, as been brought up, a good bassline could really make this track pop out.

if i can add to the track i would like to mnake a song of this.

I can see this expanding to either a Hip Hop or R & B song. Whats missing is a killer bass line and nice percusssion. Keep at this one I like the mood your evoking.
Cru

if still working on this you should add some more to the track i feel like there is room for alot more. i have been useing the tempo 120 and there is cool stuff out there :)

very chill

very chill

Title showed me a true new road and I find this new something, the open spaces is a nice playing field. You've confirmed to me that by using these lil melodies go a long way, less is more for the voices to be added. Kind of retro feeling because it takes me way back to a time way different.

Hope you find the right collab for this, smooth with it. Thanks for sharing, good as is too. Peace.

chill an laid back!thats dope.rnb singer would do nice on this.i like it.nice work