Nice beat. It just feels like it is missing something.
So let me allow you enter my mind for a second. When I am rapping I like the beat to tell its own story and then I just add my 2 cents over it. What rappers are forgetting is that the beats is the music that holds it all together. And If you cant feel the beat it is not for you. Even if it is a hot Beat. But I feel like the percussion needs some velocity changes throughout and add some swing because it has a robotic feel to it. The lead needs some layering to make it more robust. But nice mellow track. there is a story in there just enhance it a bit. Nice work.
Thank you very much that you took the time to take a listen and leave a comment.
I like the abrupt difference between the melodic chorus and the following aggressive mood.
Hey Shatner, I am a big fan of the Striking Daggers! You and Bonez are a good team! It would be an honor for me to collaborate with you. The piano puts me almost in hypnosis.
Smooth and a classic. Nice expression, has a good bounce to it, ears approve of a good listen. Someone out there has the words of view tho I'm digging how the instrumental is speaking on its own. Placement and quality sounds are perfect. The way its put together is motivating, inspiring lyrically. Well balanced happy and sad, the good and the bad. Simplistic and full entertainment. Great work, thank you for sharing. Peace.
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Preciate the art
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So let me allow you enter my mind for a second. When I am rapping I like the beat to tell its own story and then I just add my 2 cents over it. What rappers are forgetting is that the beats is the music that holds it all together. And If you cant feel the beat it is not for you. Even if it is a hot Beat. But I feel like the percussion needs some velocity changes throughout and add some swing because it has a robotic feel to it. The lead needs some layering to make it more robust. But nice mellow track. there is a story in there just enhance it a bit. Nice work.
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Good job.
Cheers!
I like the abrupt difference between the melodic chorus and the following aggressive mood.
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Cool,smooth track.
Cheers!
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Thanks Shatner!
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