I don't mean to be rude. But I felt that... the kick was a little overused. In your drops it was just overcompressing the song. I'd either use less kicks, try for another rhythm on the drums, keep the note and chord progression. This will ensure that your melody gets out there.
Ahh that piano loop. I have used it as well and it's just brilliant. You have made a beautiful interpretation to lead to dubstep. good work. I agree the end needs to be fixed. Awesome production BTW.
Cru
Hey man! I absolutely love this track. The ambient but hard feel to it hits me close to home.
While this track is practically FLAWLESS, there is just one thing I would edit. The snare seems a little too punchy during the verses and a little lost during the drop. To fix this I would just drop the level slightly and throw a small reverb on it to help it drive the ambiance of the song while still keeping it's punchy attitude!
Otherwise, I'm amazed at what you've done here. Keep up the good work and check out some of my stuff too :)
Hi Bro, this is a great track. Can i have your kind permission to use this for a composition of mine, its for a commercial release..please do let know. Thanks :)
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Mykael
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Pretty nice work on the piano you may pass a lot of time to make that sounds like that.
Nice work dear friend.
Peace
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Good song
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While this track is practically FLAWLESS, there is just one thing I would edit. The snare seems a little too punchy during the verses and a little lost during the drop. To fix this I would just drop the level slightly and throw a small reverb on it to help it drive the ambiance of the song while still keeping it's punchy attitude!
Otherwise, I'm amazed at what you've done here. Keep up the good work and check out some of my stuff too :)
Best,
Skwish Fish
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