topclass

sorry for your loss! great job on the track.

nice work man

Me gustó mucho como musicaste tu historia

nicely done

sounds pretty good man..im digging it..

Really sinister. Thanks

this is great

whats the name of that first guitar sample you used?

hey thanks man great track and great mind

So, first let me say I really like the vibe on this one. I do think the fact that the brass part is pitched in a different key gives the piece some dissonance that I'm not sure goes with the happy feel of the song (just my two bit opinion and it doesn't mean much, haha). Not sure you have the ability to raise the pitch on different parts, but if you do, see about raising the pitch on the brass section (can't tell for sure, but it sounds like it could go up either one or one and one half steps). I think you will like the result. Other than that it is really nicely done. I especially enjoyed the pads at the 4:50 mark and that killer bass and drums driving things nicely home.

Mix is really nice too, with all of the instruments having plenty of room to breathe. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

Funky in deed! Nice one Top!

I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE SAY ENJOY!
But ... enjoy I did and very much so.
This is a great little number you got going here.
Very well put together.

great brass work
enjoyed this
-CAP

Cheers to you Topclass! Very cool track. Really enjoyed it.

This will be getting nicked by those members who never made a tune in their lives but come here to download stuff.
I've jjust listened to this while watching a cliff diving video. Where they wear a flying suit and chuck themselves off the cliff and often fly for miles with just the suit keeping them going.
It worked great.
I'm convinced you have a commercial winner here for videos etc.

Checking out your music after our chat in the forums i was just curious :) some how your track reminds me to the old days i was playing super mario brothers. :)

Sounds like trance if it happened in the 80s! Such a catchy and cool synth line, love it.

awesome mate. pure pop goodness.! I like.

Electro is not my thing, but I like this one.

Very cool, love the sense of space you have created. Arpeggios and percussion working in perfect concert.Always changing! What I have found with the longer tunes that I have made, I start to find a cohesive stride in the last parts.
Nice Work.
Cru

Top, if you're looking for some insight into cinematic loops and bringing instruments to life, feel free to contact me through email. I don't know what programs you use but I know Minor2Go and myself are both very much into the cinematic stuff, and there's a ton of things that could use some work here. I wouldn't let that get you down though, I feel like the genre itself is really frustratingly difficult.

As far as this goes, I feel like there are some major conflicts between loops, and ends up being a muddled synthy mess that likes to confuse the keys. Sometimes this can work, dissonance can be a friend at times--although I think if you put more thought into telling a story the picture would be painted much more clearly.

nice and eerie. i like it!

Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.

1. You use so many different sounds and drum pattens, but the best one IMO (In my opinion) is the one used at the 2:55 mark.

2. The track as a whole seems to be kind of all over the place in the sense that the instrument sounds are in different keys and don't align with the bass line. Id try and hone in to a pattern and build around that before jumping to an entirely new section.

3. The intro is so long that I had to turn up the volume to its max until I had to back it down a few notches when the track kicked in with the loop I mentioned in point 1.

Overall, there are some good attributes here but it just wasn't as cohesive as I personally would have liked.

Good job though.

GREAT!

Spooky