DonPaul

nice job, like the synths and pads you have throughout the track, maybe cut out that real distorted kick for parts of the song and then bring it back in, make it something you keep wanting to hear, not just something thats there, but man, love the track.
ThatcheR

This is an intersting fusion. Your kick is so distorted and overdriven it sounds like a gabber kick. Personally im not a huge gabber fan so im glad its got some trance too. Cool

very good and even better considering you're not in yr comfort zone with the genre. Very moving synth and chorus sound. Maybe some tuffer snares and heavier breaks at times might help improve things, layer the existing ones possibly?I liked and think u should write more d and b

I like it!. Nice distorted bass, love those effects on it. I think a few different drum fills and stuff would be great too. Just mix it up there. That choral sound is nice too nice melody throughout!

well done its a nice track i like it very much l think though that you need to inhance you drum loops and synths and bass but a part from that 10-10 mate but thats my advice turn your samples up and drum loops and that will sound perfect check out my tune call'd

syntholigy and you will see what i mean mate ok any hows respect

Nice build up, nice layering, nice intensity after the first...I don't know what it's called... a break ? when the beat stops and the melody continues ? Nice job.

Hey man

Nice track, thought would check this one as I made the other version fav, good solid beat here with nice filtering synths, adding this to fav's also, good work man...

Estefano

Hey Dj

Man nice intro to this track mate,nice build up to main piece, has lots of protential this track, looking forward to when it is completed, give me a holla when it is done plz...

Estefano

nice kick and the bass is nice and not too obvious which is good, i like the way the little riff swings from ear to ear, and then progresses into the heavier dusty trance sound, your keeping it interesting which is fab :)

well im all about hard trance....and i think this would go over well in some clubs. if your in the right places. i would not have such long break downs though if you want to keep the people moven man you got to keep pumpin' :D lol nice work tho
DJ SYNTHIZIZ

Hey Don!
Listen: (wtf listen to a text XD)
I think this is a really nice mastered song!
It's not very complicated but I liked it the way it is

Also it is a nice trance song but I don't think this is something to play in clubs... I got listen to it when I'm behind my desk though ;) (for hours!!!)

Hey DJ

very nice piece man, so really like the intro and the build up to the track, great easy listening piece, nicely arranged, very nice work my friend, add to fav's for sure...Peace...

Estefano

very nice on the ears bro..i just got done in the studio for 13 hours....its nice to hear some easy going trance for a while..nice work bro

nice percussion sounds.....solid bassline (often underused in trance in my opinion)....key melodies are good also. This has a bit of a "Jakata" feel to it.
well done
Trax

I know how it feels to get "writers block" but I finally got around to make new songs! Sometimes taking a break really makes a diference and your music sounds great after. Your song here is a perfect example. great job! Please don't ever quit! ;)

Hey nice work on this one! I like the begining with the orchestral type melody.Then the bassline effects and other melodies come in and takes the track away! Nice work and interesting track!
Keep up the good work man!

Hey Dj

Nice intro to this piece, really like the build up you have happening, again very good beat and wicked synths, you got talent mate, look forward to hearing more from you okies....Keep em coming...adding to fav's...

Estefano

Man

This is one wicked track mate, love everything about it, very nice synths, great arrangement, topped off with really great beat and base...adding to fav's man...well done...

Estefano

Got some good stuff on your hands mate, brought the bass in a lil earlyi thought but great stuff mate.

Gutta learn from the pros eh ;) You got it good. Bass goes nicely, synths diff from what I'm used to... lol but still great, Nice cutting of beats.
Honestly though, I think the melody's a bit long, but other than that great tune bud, I won't snage a tune becuase I respect your talent and ability, great stuff mate. Oh and nice use of Reason 4, I'm still getting there haha
Safe
Steve

wow, nice track!
jaja i have this refill on my reason but the way you used it is so cool

impressive the vocal thing is different and really cool. nice d and b try more of these

Yes it is a nice trance-track. I like the melody line. Added to favs.

This is your best so far. Everything flows perfectly with just the right mix of highs & lows.

Needs more cowbell!

Great summer club track, 10/10 . Cheers Slap...