I really like the lyrics, real shi*. But, I'm not really feeling the singing part, I think you should just take that out and let the beats take over for a bit.
Nice use of samples man, love the scratchin. I think you should use some more of that oriental and bell stuff at the begining. beef it up a bit is all. good work.
I like both versions of this track but this one more because there's more presence, both vocally and musically in my opinion. You have a great vocal delivery esp those slides into singing voice. That's a hard message man, could not just walk on by. Demands to be heard. Thanks for yr work and peace.
Da beat knockz, and ya got some killa flowz. ya need a better mich set-up or something though, cause ya voice soundz too low on this one, but ya flow shines, I'm feelin it cutthoat. Ya definetely got a swagger on this one, stay on point, ya got some tight barz...
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