Everything is great, but I agree with Dime about the sudden stop, if I was me, I would use a subtle disc stop effect or something or the sort for the sudden stop, but also add maybe hits of the same effect or similar sounds throughout the track. Doesn't have to be a disc effect, but you get what I mean. For this the sudden stop I think is a negative without something to back it up.
nice work lads, good vocals nice pace and flow great guitar and the melody and beat are on point, you put work into it, you should revisit the finish though, the mix and mastering are good i dont mind straight stops but that was to abrupt, a lazy finish thats the last thing you here it needs to be as good as the intro
the lyrics are cool man, you and your friend both killed it. try and stay consistent with it and you'll be srt8. If you ever want free features hit my email, I make the same stuff. Also, www.goodhertz.com has a 30 day free trial on all their plugins, it will help the mixing process a lot.
Hello (ignore my name it's old) We at Jackal Studios want to put this song in our upcoming cyberpunk anime called UndaWorld we would like permission to use it with regard and credit I would also be happy to give you my discord that way you can join us with music production (we also need voice actors) moving along I await your reply...
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you can find the normal pitched version there,
thanks for the feedback brother appreciate it
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