The themes in the song sound pretty good. I can definitely hear a lot of potential. However, I have some criticisms about the track. First off, at 0:46, when the beat drops the song doesn't sound full. It's missing a mid-range instrument to fill out the frequency range. It'll make it sound a lot better. Also the first half of the song feels like it goes on for too long. There aren't enough changes to make it interesting to listen to for that long.
Overall I think if you fix a couple of things this could be a really, really good track. Keep working and great work!
on Submarine Heart - Zone by OkRaise
on Thunderstorm by OkRaise
Overall I think if you fix a couple of things this could be a really, really good track. Keep working and great work!
-Sheen
on Endless Embraces by OkRaise
but, had Fennesz been in OMD, well...
true respect.