J14

The vocals seem a bit high pitched for my tastes, but overall I really enjoyed the track.

I think you did a damn good job.

John

Thats pretty ill man.

Simply Amazing blazing wet wet in dazing passion fruit juice chasing just in case the vodka burns my mouth wasn't paying attention what was them wacky jackys talking about this hotter than sun on slaves in the south with not water for they mouth. Zig zag designs on the producers mind so zig zag with my lines instead of cutting them str8 with a credit card intoxicated with hard hitting visions.... It inspired me quick like

No Criticism from here mane tha sheit iz phat my man, tha only thing I'd really say bout this track iz lace that sheit with sum fiiiira..

Hi, I found your profile because of forums, you were searching for some vocals.. And then I heard this one and I like the feeling, I only want to say that maybe bringing the base a bit forward and putting the rattle (or however it's called:) a bit behind (less loud)...

As MrE said it does need a little harder bass, but even as it is it's a really good track, I would have downloaded if it had been set up that way.

If you go in and edit it so it can be downloaded let me know, I want it.

nice one man!

deffs getting the sht out on this track. ha damn nice man!
nice beat also mate!

RUN... haha good sht
really nice.

PEACE!
Butcha d-_-b

You've got some serious guitar skills my friend. It's almost disheartening to know that people who play this well exist... but I'm not gonna let it phaze me... : )

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i cut for this joint... makes me wanna knock someones head off... keep doing what you do homie.

It's off to a greatstart. Any idea who wrote the guitar ? Nice arrangement man. Yeah, I can hear the vocals coming.

yeah i agree with the intergral, its just that one part, but overall its a good track man let me know when you get the lyrics up. I would love to check it out.

This beat goes hard. Yeah change up the beat a lil bit and it will really be a banger. Nice work.

Heeyyyy I like this this is Fiya for real I hope to see that come out well!
-M1SsL1Ss

This has a real nice synth. i think you could mix the beats up a bit and Make it heavier. Id like to hear it with the lyrics and stuff. Maybe a change of tempo would be cool.

Beat is f*ckin sick dude, loved it, the only thing i can criticize is the voice you used in the chorus is a little out of key on the line "i used to hold you down" if you hit that note better you got your self a solid club banger, im interested in hearing the lyrics man...good doin work son

Has a nice sound, like the intro, the overall beat and outro. Middle seems to be lacking though, a bit repetitive without a feature such as melody or vocals, but nevertheless very smooth. Great as background/soundtrack. Nice job m8. -DF

One of the better tracks I have heard on this site.

The track is nice,... I like the piano in particular,... TerriosOne

sounds like a soundtrack to a movie you should sell this one man im telling you its pretty impressive

I really like the beginning, and your drum sound is killer sounding. Good job man.

not bad, but I think you lack a heavier bit, I first thought it a bit to heat up, but anyway I like. sorry for bad English

i think em himself would spit to this!!i think it sounds tight man!!!keep doin ya thing!!one

pretty cool production sounded like a funeralat a big church then after that itz out on your own in this big world... cool keep it going 1

Sounds pretty phat to me, the variation on the bass at the end was spot on, if i had to suggest an improvement id say maybe put some kind of automation on the bass throughout the song to make it a little more dynamic, maybe a slight phaser or something. Not much of an improvement really just might add a cool effect. Good to see more dnb making its way on here. Keep it up.
peace, sketch

nice natural fx's!!!great choir melody and flutes..yes i like it so much, very original production...keep it rollin mate!!!