Hello E:)
Very good effort for not using loops.
Brilliant so far I believe need to give it a bit of variation then you have a wonderful track.
Very good effort well done.
Fav's it goes.
Jamid
hello jamid
thank you much much for the kind words .
yes I'm agree , variation can make it absolutely better ,
yet I had no idea for how to make variation .
thank you vary much for the support and fav my friend.
means alot .
Hi danke
:)
nice to read your words in my box ,
thank you much much for checking my stuff out and dropping these kind words .
it means alot to me to see you have such idea about it .
A groovy groovy groovy groovy groove. This is a monster groove. I hope you build something on it cuz there's so much you could do with it. Cool that you somehow generated all these sounds yourself. Me, I'm dependent on loops to get going. Great job - great start of something major.
:) yes but it's so hard to me when it's not supposed to use any loop to get going .
thank you very much CitizenMofo for dropping these kind words
into my box .
I'm glad of reading your comment , thank you much much .
Hey Elena , it's nice .
amazing guitar theme , Ed's guitar is an instrumental hymonography .
I think you've used their loops in a different way ,
a beautifull composition which has chill out taste .
Hi Elena
nice to find you still activate here .
I enjoyes those classical guitar you've used in it .
it's groovy , and yes it rocks .
I also suggest you to write drum line by yourself , it's a pitty
that this track has no drum line .
here there are many usefull drum loops for you .
hi there ! the guitar loops are nice ! i feel them. Like, when you hear somethng and say "i wish i come up with that" hehe, that's my feel to it.
Nice track !
Um....WTF !
This is like Heavy Metal House !
Definitely NOT disco. More like some really really Deep House. I gotta tell you I'm just laughing my ass off here right now because this is not at all what I was expecting from someone with an Avatar like yours. Please forgive me for making such a big jack ass male chauvinistic statement such as that but its the honest truth. I mean the track got my attention right off with the crazy syncopation intro and very clever progression but when you hit those first few power chords I thought "no fuckin way" ! Is she she gonna lay some heavy guitar in this thing? The next thought was, ah no way, I'm dreaming. And then you did !!
Man you kicked my ass girl, I love it !
The suggestions by Steve and Aaron are noteworthy, my only added critique is the abrupt ending. It kind of left me hanging...with my mouth open and drool running out. I seriously like what you did here and it definitely got my attention. Very cool track. I could become a huge fan of the Ladyinred !
yes I'm agree with deep house ,
thank you for the comment and attention .
about ending , I should design a better ending , you're right .
I appreciate your comment .
I like what you have here. There is an interesting mix of elements to this song. With the guitars in the second half, it's almost like two songs in one.
The transition was fairly well executed. I think if you follow Steve's advice on the muddiness of the guitars, it would help the transition. The House end is very clean and clear, so it doesn't entirely feel like it belongs there. I think if you added a nice deep rich sub bass starting at 4:24 it would help fill it out a little more. It does feel kind of empty until about 6:02. The pads underneath are good, but maybe a little more hi hats.
At 6:13, you've done a great job at reintroducing the House. It's a nice gradual, nearly seamless transition. The ending is a little abrupt, but it still works fine.
Overall, I really enjoyed it. I hope I was able to give you some good ideas. You've done good work, keep it up!
it really doesn't mind to me what genre it is .
but you'right .
thank you so much for usefull and technical advices
Valvedriver .
I really appreciate you comment .
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Compliments____Orlando
:)
thank you much much for checking my stuff out and the comment.
your positive idea means alot .
Elena
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:)
thank you much much for the comment .
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feels like something out a 90s movie
keep at it !
(LF)
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writing comment .
I appreciate your words , thanks alot .
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Very good effort for not using loops.
Brilliant so far I believe need to give it a bit of variation then you have a wonderful track.
Very good effort well done.
Fav's it goes.
Jamid
thank you much much for the kind words .
yes I'm agree , variation can make it absolutely better ,
yet I had no idea for how to make variation .
thank you vary much for the support and fav my friend.
means alot .
Elena
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this easily could be a commercial or trailer music on Ozone Network or so...amazing pulsation from that big groovy...
faved with greetings, Danke
:)
nice to read your words in my box ,
thank you much much for checking my stuff out and dropping these kind words .
it means alot to me to see you have such idea about it .
Elena
on forever by ElenaSatine
thank you very much CitizenMofo for dropping these kind words
into my box .
I'm glad of reading your comment , thank you much much .
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For loops this track is brilliant.
You have the talent to make a huge defendant within the track.
Really well done good work :)
Jamid
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amazing guitar theme , Ed's guitar is an instrumental hymonography .
I think you've used their loops in a different way ,
a beautifull composition which has chill out taste .
Cindy
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this shows you're enough to add drum line to your other tracks too .
yes I love its drum line .
thank you much much cindy for checking my works out .
on villain by ElenaSatine
nice to find you still activate here .
I enjoyes those classical guitar you've used in it .
it's groovy , and yes it rocks .
I also suggest you to write drum line by yourself , it's a pitty
that this track has no drum line .
here there are many usefull drum loops for you .
Cindy
thank you much much for the words .
:)
Elena
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Steve
I really appreciate your kindness and the words .
:)
Elena
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tempo is 150 bmp .
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on villain by ElenaSatine
let's see what you'll do :)
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Nice track !
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Compliments_____Orlando
:)
Elena
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A drummer on here named Laurent may have some beats that can go with this:
https://www.looperman.com/users/loops/2054129
you've helped me alot with this comment .
I really appreciate your help .
:)
Elena
on villain by ElenaSatine
I've composed this track .
on years are passing by by ElenaSatine
thanks for the comment , I'm agree with you about electro .
your idea was usefull , thank you much much .
on Explosion by ElenaSatine
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on Explosion by ElenaSatine
This is like Heavy Metal House !
Definitely NOT disco. More like some really really Deep House. I gotta tell you I'm just laughing my ass off here right now because this is not at all what I was expecting from someone with an Avatar like yours. Please forgive me for making such a big jack ass male chauvinistic statement such as that but its the honest truth. I mean the track got my attention right off with the crazy syncopation intro and very clever progression but when you hit those first few power chords I thought "no fuckin way" ! Is she she gonna lay some heavy guitar in this thing? The next thought was, ah no way, I'm dreaming. And then you did !!
Man you kicked my ass girl, I love it !
The suggestions by Steve and Aaron are noteworthy, my only added critique is the abrupt ending. It kind of left me hanging...with my mouth open and drool running out. I seriously like what you did here and it definitely got my attention. Very cool track. I could become a huge fan of the Ladyinred !
thank you for the comment and attention .
about ending , I should design a better ending , you're right .
I appreciate your comment .
on Explosion by ElenaSatine
I like what you have here. There is an interesting mix of elements to this song. With the guitars in the second half, it's almost like two songs in one.
The transition was fairly well executed. I think if you follow Steve's advice on the muddiness of the guitars, it would help the transition. The House end is very clean and clear, so it doesn't entirely feel like it belongs there. I think if you added a nice deep rich sub bass starting at 4:24 it would help fill it out a little more. It does feel kind of empty until about 6:02. The pads underneath are good, but maybe a little more hi hats.
At 6:13, you've done a great job at reintroducing the House. It's a nice gradual, nearly seamless transition. The ending is a little abrupt, but it still works fine.
Overall, I really enjoyed it. I hope I was able to give you some good ideas. You've done good work, keep it up!
Take care,
V.
but you'right .
thank you so much for usefull and technical advices
Valvedriver .
I really appreciate you comment .