Had a pretty slow, basic beginning, however; It caught my attention soon afterwards. I enjoyed the chilling sound movements. The vocals were also well arranged along with the song. Nice!
hahaha @ SeriouslyJoking, Its called a dj friendly 12" mix. the beginning is used to mix from the last track into this one when its played out in a club. did make me chuckle a little that comment lol.
Really nice chords and melody.
If you were to take all the bass out of the track as it builds, when the track comes in it will hit a little harder.
Great switch up at the 4 min mark really helps lift the track up and keep it moving.
If i had to say a couple of things it would be.
The sub bass is too deep, im not sure if you have put the filter too low or if the octave is too low but its not really very audible. maybe making a second copy with an exciter or a distortion on it and mixing it with the bass you have already would make it stick out a little more?
The leed synth lines are a little mid and bass heavy. If you were to cut them a little higher in frequency (Bout 200 ish) and have a higher octave bass line with a side chain compressor on it the track would sonically sound bigger and fuller.
If your worried about there not being enough room in the mix then just duplicate the leed line and pan one all the way left and one all the way right. then pull one of the leed lines backward or forward by a couple of milliseconds. This will give them loads of presence and width without you having to do much work and will give you room for the vocals, kick snare and bass.
I think (but not sure) that your Fx channels still have all there bass on them? taking them up to about 500hz (apart from the sub kick drop ovs ;) will stop them interfering with the rest of the track.
The master buss is compressed and limited really heavily and is causing the track lose its dynamics, this is causing sound spikes to pop out.
I know I must read like a complete Ar$ehole but Its all ment in a constructive mannor and I actually like the track alot and would love to hear it sound its best :)
Ps
The drums are superb. Pretty much cant fault them :)
If you would like me to do a stem mixdown to show you what I mean, let me know and ill video capture it as I mix it down so you can see what im doing :)
wow! you are not an amateur like me. yes it`s 12" mix ,but the beginning is still too empty and about the bass yes it`s too low meybe need to tweak up the Hz lettle bit (symsynth FL 10), but the real problem is my equipment small room and big speakers and they not stay where they should be and making music with headphones are not a very qualytative way. so the point is i`m not hearin` very well what i`m doing and that`s why happens this. i understand what are u talking about. thanks your offer that`s very kind from you, but i want this to be done myself!
Cheers! :)
Really boring untill ~1:50 and then I nearly DIED - Boom - how good is that?!?!?!
A great house tune you have created here, lovely vocals and an enjoyable melody.
Just do something about the beginning, some kind of build up would be nice. And some more action and variation troughout and you have a club banger house tune here.
thanks for yor comment! yes i know that, but this is not the eventual version, and i don`t know what is wrong with this i know something is and i will correct it soon!
Thanks again!
cheers! :)
Thank you! Yes, i know that, but I can`t find some good vocals and I don`t have good instruments or a good voice to make one especially a Girl vocal can be good in here.
Cheers! :)
My friend, that is a million dollar beat if you know what i mean. i would love to collaborate with you on this one, however....i would like you to firstly listen to some of my work that i have uploaded here on looperma. it's one song and one mixtape..... if you are impressed please let me know. i also would love to have a midi file of the beat, but i am using FL Studio...i dont know about you. my email address is... dolbrey@gmail.com i salute!!!!!!
glad to hearing(well reading..) that. thank you! :) of course, I make everything what my sampler can do, i have some tracks with sampled vocals and if you want i can send you the midi and/or the .wav sample for this track. the exact answer for yor question is yes i do, like an amateur. :) one more thing: SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH. Cheers :)
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~Ookami
http://soundcloud.com/ecto9/ecto9-feat-catafarina-music-is
Cheers! :)
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Really nice chords and melody.
If you were to take all the bass out of the track as it builds, when the track comes in it will hit a little harder.
Great switch up at the 4 min mark really helps lift the track up and keep it moving.
If i had to say a couple of things it would be.
The sub bass is too deep, im not sure if you have put the filter too low or if the octave is too low but its not really very audible. maybe making a second copy with an exciter or a distortion on it and mixing it with the bass you have already would make it stick out a little more?
The leed synth lines are a little mid and bass heavy. If you were to cut them a little higher in frequency (Bout 200 ish) and have a higher octave bass line with a side chain compressor on it the track would sonically sound bigger and fuller.
If your worried about there not being enough room in the mix then just duplicate the leed line and pan one all the way left and one all the way right. then pull one of the leed lines backward or forward by a couple of milliseconds. This will give them loads of presence and width without you having to do much work and will give you room for the vocals, kick snare and bass.
I think (but not sure) that your Fx channels still have all there bass on them? taking them up to about 500hz (apart from the sub kick drop ovs ;) will stop them interfering with the rest of the track.
The master buss is compressed and limited really heavily and is causing the track lose its dynamics, this is causing sound spikes to pop out.
I know I must read like a complete Ar$ehole but Its all ment in a constructive mannor and I actually like the track alot and would love to hear it sound its best :)
Ps
The drums are superb. Pretty much cant fault them :)
If you would like me to do a stem mixdown to show you what I mean, let me know and ill video capture it as I mix it down so you can see what im doing :)
Cheers! :)
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A great house tune you have created here, lovely vocals and an enjoyable melody.
Just do something about the beginning, some kind of build up would be nice. And some more action and variation troughout and you have a club banger house tune here.
Thanks again!
cheers! :)
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Cheers! :)
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Cheers! :)
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Very nice track!
Great beat n bass,awesome effects!
Good work!
Thanks once again! Cheers :)