srob1234

Hi

Brilliant track mate.
I love the drum.

I like the instrument that sounds like a sample (or it very well could be) and I love the effect you placed on it when you make the transition to the verses. Keep up the good work.

nice track, minimalist as i like
congrates
Bleep

i respect a groovy chord progression. but your drums may be being too compressed in the hook part

Loving the unique drum patteren.

Also loving the piano!

Well done srob :).

Keen to give it a shot and put some lyrics down for this track - I've listened to a lot today and this one is the one that sparked some inspiration.
Here's something I prepped earlier from a track by fellow looperman user ill.fitting, and some other soundcloud goodies - I'm more commonly a battle MC but got bars for weeks....

https://soundcloud.com/doc-apocalypse/banana-clip-sundae

nice...hmu at 520 609-9983
john
www.ghost420.com

Amazing powerful stuff! Love how you fused all these elements together! Great job, srob1234! :)

Nice vox. Song is a little over compressed to me. Please don't get made at the comments but it would sound so much better if it was mixed better.

I heard you calling, so here I am! (lame, ikr lol)
Anyways, nice track :) I certainly like it.

I can not sing, I should not sing, and I have little to zero know-how from it basically. Listened the track a few times and taken in account what 8Kass8 said, I might actually agree on that on some way.

But only on the double layer parts where the 2nd voice might be a key or so higher. Examples will be 0:36/0:42 etc.

Nevertheless is it already a splendid track! Just sharing some thoughts.

Keep it up,
-Wobbin

Hi Srob

Went to the right guy for loops, Martin is brilliant at what he does, one of the best on the site for sure, nice singing, I cant sing or play a thing lol, always admire someone who can do either, nice work on this one...fav...Peace n respect....mosaic...

Your insight definitely has potential, you really a good job all the way around! Nice!

TD

well .. nice hook , you did good singing that ( a higher note would be better i think ) and i like the keys .. Good Job anyway :)

Nice, good job!

cool song all around,nice work.

Sweet!

great job!! love that hook :D so many beats to choose from XD

Hey there this a great concept for a Hip Hop track. Minor2go's string loop really did add character to the tune. Would love to hear this with some vocals, great job keep up the good work.

Peace

D

BOOM!

Why can't I hit that download button? *sadface* lol

Splendid exciting track. I notice the buildups SheenSheep mentioned as well but I assume that its exactly meant as it sounds, since theres is pretty sure someone who begs to rap on this awesome track. The pluckies on the end are a very nice add.

least but not last, the intro and outro are done correctly. You may think 'duuuh' but it often gets forgotten or slammed to hard into things.

This track reminds me of the Step up 1 soundtrack btw. :D

Beat is heavy :))

Love the way you use the strings and other elements. :)

This is a great, solid beat, really like it. The mix is also well done.

One complaint though is that When the beat started building up at 0:39 it felt like it was leading up to something, but at 1:42 when the buildup ended it felt wasted like there was nothing worth building up to. What I would do is cut off the drums at 0:42 and bring them back in at 0:45 (8 bars long). Same at 1:47.

Great work on this song.

-Sheen

WHAAATT :D loving this beat ,great job :D

Mega-good stuff right here! It kicks some Hip Hop butt near the end. Whatever that is that sounds like vocals turned into instruments is killer. Great Job.

Love & Light,

Mykael

Nice.. That hook is awesome