hey great track only thing i would recommend would be making it a little more dynamic like bring in a crazy guitar solo or something would top it off. good job
Good usage mate! That there kicks you in the buttom! You got the beat down the bass is dun up right for this track fo sho.
Now, here'd be my tip for joo, just to drive this inna diff direction just a lil. Try using a diff sound for your pad synth, maybe something a bit more stabby and less stringy? The long release pad seems kind too trancey for this pumping beat? If that makes sense. The progression is tops and the vocal sample is tite. Extend the whole piece 2-3x put inna a 2nd drop and go back to look at that envelope filter on the bass, see if you can't dial in a bigger wop wop on the hits!
Sometimes a simple track can be the best kind of track but then again sometimes is can be quiet the opposite... i'd say that you're in between, it's got potential it just needs eqing, obviously more length, and a little strength to it
But all in all, keep it up,
Pce
Steve
if you're looking to nitpick ... i would say that at points, some of the levels were low ... in the beginning, there were points where I wanted one of the layers to be a bit more present/dominant ... other than that ... keep it up ...
Hey yea i fucking loved that intro maybe add a helicopter flying by and fading im not sure the style ur going for if its a battle or what but when the beat dropped the bass is nice i got to alpine type E bagging in my room and that shit was dope i would love to take it and add lyrics if you don't mind get at me let me know if its cool with u i do it?
loolz thanx...yhh dats a good idea man helicopters..ill see wwat i can do...and i onli made this beat in abt half an hour and dat...but thanks for the feedbak...and yhh you can take the track and do wateva u want...but u hve to send me wat u have dun viv i.... i was thinkng about war and shit soo i made this beat man...
soo 1 love for the feedbak and lookin foward to lisin to ur version
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the rap is hard and dirty as u placed it.
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Now, here'd be my tip for joo, just to drive this inna diff direction just a lil. Try using a diff sound for your pad synth, maybe something a bit more stabby and less stringy? The long release pad seems kind too trancey for this pumping beat? If that makes sense. The progression is tops and the vocal sample is tite. Extend the whole piece 2-3x put inna a 2nd drop and go back to look at that envelope filter on the bass, see if you can't dial in a bigger wop wop on the hits!
Ok I lissned 3x so I must've liked it?! :D
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But all in all, keep it up,
Pce
Steve
thanks
Ayan
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I'd keep going, but loose the strings overload and keep it kinda griity and dirty. Think Wookie or El-B! :)
yhh i was thinking to lose the strings anyway...i gues i wud cary on this beat...i will upload as soon as im done..
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soo 1 love for the feedbak and lookin foward to lisin to ur version
hold it