MOONLYTE

Super brilliant!!!

Did You ever heard about the band called Stabbing Westward???

In feeling...

fistbump bro, Danke

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5NZsCYOM4j0

Great title! Woah SUPER DAR TRAP! REMINDS OF OCD HE HAS DARK MAYERIAL LIKE THIS CHECK HIM OUT OCD HIS 2 SONGS HEARSE TRIP AND OFF THE LEASH. U PROBABLY HAVE HEARD OF HIM. YOUR TRACK HERE REMINDS ME OF OFF THE LEASH. GOOD WORK MAN

Naturally, I love this track. I like it dark.

Very nice production...the choir arrangement is just right.

so good my friend

Hard ass beat

Officially scared now, naw jk, nice work.

Love the build up as the song goes on.
I can imagine this on a big screen.
The voices fit well and add more "darkness" to this.
Very nice!

It is really proffesional. Thank you !

I love this fresh beat. I feel like it could be in a video game. Nice!!!

good beat!!!

itss so nice

I try twicw times and happens some error. but this music is so magic do give up. Thanks!

awesome

I like the punk rap influence in this track.

Gj nice

very aggressive..love it

Awesome track classic!

Awesome track classic!

very good song indeed, like!

one of the best out here!

Amazing! this music is very appealing.

wow nice

I agree with comment below. The chorus needs a bit of clarity to one of the two vocal parts. clear out some space in the mix for the vox and I think it improves the song x2.

Alright.. I don't judge people's talent, that's not on me.. certain styles and certain things appeal to certain groups and just because it's not me doesn't mean it's not heat. Now, on to the technical and delivery side. Your track has too much sheen.. your voice is getting lost in the amount of treble you have especially for the mood and voice your using.. your beats should not be so crispy and clear if you're going to be running the angry voice. It needs to match the grittiness. You definitely need a little extra work seating your vocals into the mix.. they feel like you're sitting in the bottom of a well shouting angrily while the beat is played to us who are on top of the well. Try layering out 3 vox runs, slightly panning and creating a stereo image, then bus the 3 to an aux and run a vox chain to harmonize and blend the 3 to create a larger more encompassing feel. As far as arrangement goes, your intro felt too long and empty. I had to double check and make sure I was listening to an actual song and not just a beat. Perhaps maybe some adlibs or even some speaking through the 30 seconds it took to get to you rapping. I lost interest after the initial intro and still had to wait to hear you. That intro is what's gonna grab folks.. make me want to keep listening to hear what happens. Overall though very decent quality, and there is potential here.. just sounds like some late nights sitting lonely in front of the boards is what you need lol.