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Great title! Woah SUPER DAR TRAP! REMINDS OF OCD HE HAS DARK MAYERIAL LIKE THIS CHECK HIM OUT OCD HIS 2 SONGS HEARSE TRIP AND OFF THE LEASH. U PROBABLY HAVE HEARD OF HIM. YOUR TRACK HERE REMINDS ME OF OFF THE LEASH. GOOD WORK MAN

Naturally, I love this track. I like it dark.

so good my friend

Hard ##### beat

Love the build up as the song goes on.
I can imagine this on a big screen.
The voices fit well and add more "darkness" to this.
Very nice!

It is really proffesional. Thank you !

good beat!!!

itss so nice

I try twicw times and happens some error. but this music is so magic do give up. Thanks!

awesome

I like the punk rap influence in this track.

Gj nice

very aggressive..love it

Awesome track classic!

Awesome track classic!

one of the best out here!

Amazing! this music is very appealing.

wow nice

I agree with comment below. The chorus needs a bit of clarity to one of the two vocal parts. clear out some space in the mix for the vox and I think it improves the song x2.

Alright.. I don't judge people's talent, that's not on me.. certain styles and certain things appeal to certain groups and just because it's not me doesn't mean it's not heat. Now, on to the technical and delivery side. Your track has too much sheen.. your voice is getting lost in the amount of treble you have especially for the mood and voice your using.. your beats should not be so crispy and clear if you're going to be running the angry voice. It needs to match the grittiness. You definitely need a little extra work seating your vocals into the mix.. they feel like you're sitting in the bottom of a well shouting angrily while the beat is played to us who are on top of the well. Try layering out 3 vox runs, slightly panning and creating a stereo image, then bus the 3 to an aux and run a vox chain to harmonize and blend the 3 to create a larger more encompassing feel. As far as arrangement goes, your intro felt too long and empty. I had to double check and make sure I was listening to an actual song and not just a beat. Perhaps maybe some adlibs or even some speaking through the 30 seconds it took to get to you rapping. I lost interest after the initial intro and still had to wait to hear you. That intro is what's gonna grab folks.. make me want to keep listening to hear what happens. Overall though very decent quality, and there is potential here.. just sounds like some late nights sitting lonely in front of the boards is what you need lol.

goodwork

i like that beat.

Very well made. Good job!!

I like this. I come from a long background of metal. I was lead singer and guitarist in a metal band for many years. So I'm critiquing from that point of view. Your vocals are strong. The melody parts are cool. The screaming parts are too. From a guitar standpoint, the guitars are medium quality. The recording overall is good! It's hard to record metal and make it sound good. I've listened to a little of your solo stuff, and it's cool that you are branching out into other vocal styles. I finally did that a few years ago, and I'm glad I did, because the metal vocal is very constraining, especially in getting a message across because of the fact that more than half of what we scream can't be understood without reading the lyrics. Good job here.

cool !