Yo man, first of all, i am sorry for the loss of your dad, and you should be proud of yourself to bring such an emotional track out to a community and opening your heart, and im quite sure your dad would be very proud and looks with pride down on you man! I cannot argue with the lyrics, they come from your heart, you did what you felt was best, and I can feel that. You are doing your father proud man, respect! I hope you keep your head up even in the difficult times and that you can look back at the amazing times you had with your dad. Peace audiotism
Hey dude, nice one! certainly fills up the beat only parts very nice. Great flow. Could you send the vocal only? Maybe I can fiddle a lil with the mix? Cheers! FF
I feel the emotion from the chords, but I can't hear the vocals. They are drowned out by the music. Could be my ears. Actually, at 1:37 the vocals came in alot clearer, but it is an overall emotional track. I like the voices in the bridge. NICE! I was not expecting the drums to change like that. lol. Still emotional though.
Great Song! Pop Goes the World by Men Without Hats comes to mind. I'd like to hear some supporting vocals and maybe another lead instrument that contrasts and maybe eccentuates the lead vocal. The piano is ear catching and the message is love. Well put together and thought out. Thank you. "Nice and Radio Friendly."
KiD CuDi-esque. I feel like the mood is atleast. The track is something we dont get enough of in hip-hop today. The only thing I'm not feeling all of the way is your vocals delivery. You just dont sound so comfortable on the mic. But overall decent project. Aim high ArtfulOne! Best regaurds, -Felix-
I had to listen to this a few times because it put a smile on my face. The music is so sweet, and the lyrics just the same. The way you deliver them, I like it! Kudos my friend.
Good timing, killin it on the hook, really really like the mood, style sounds like bloodhound gang, would say maybe go half time on the verses but thats part of that style eh? sounds great
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