Very emotional track you have here. great vocals. I think maybe the chorus could've had a bigger impact with more feeling so that the listener can widen his or her imagination to your message.. Other than that this track is pretty dope .good work guys.
I like the beat but I am not feeling the BIG part.
Let me give reasons:
1) it seems like its off beat when he says 'It Was All A Dream'
2) From my rapper perspective (my opinion. You know this is my opinion, right?) it just crushes any creative aspect of creating an original track talking about anything else expect dreams.
and 3) Dreams of being an successful rapper are over populating the scene. What I mean about that is that when you want to stand our in a room full of vultures. Do not recreate, invent.
But again the beat is dope. I just feel that the music should speak for itself opposed to using vocals to do the trick.
I understand, just so you know big sample came last. After I had everything down I went through my library to see what songs were the same bpm and if i could add anything and I found juicy. i found the acapella and then put it in and cut the first bar. Obviously it didn't work perfectly since biggie didn't record for this beat but it worked well enough to where i wanted to keep it. I thought it gave this beat something unique.
its the vinyl cracking, i went a little overboard haha. i can go back and take it out if you would want to use it but i didnt think singing would really fit this. what is your email i want to send you a few beats i got in the vault
I liked how you incorporated Notorious big on the track and it has sort of a dreamy type of feel to it too. Would i be able to use this track with your permission for a project i'm doing?
Who did the vocals? The female at least, i assume your the male vocals. I like the concept and vibe to this song, has a lot of potential. It seems like it's missing, I dunno what it is though. It needs to be a tad more louder and full too, but the man that soft quiet vibe is really nice though. Keep it up bro. peace
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Let me give reasons:
1) it seems like its off beat when he says 'It Was All A Dream'
2) From my rapper perspective (my opinion. You know this is my opinion, right?) it just crushes any creative aspect of creating an original track talking about anything else expect dreams.
and 3) Dreams of being an successful rapper are over populating the scene. What I mean about that is that when you want to stand our in a room full of vultures. Do not recreate, invent.
But again the beat is dope. I just feel that the music should speak for itself opposed to using vocals to do the trick.
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