Much much much better man. That's exactly what it needed. That backdrop of strings makes everything blend together. Keep it up! Never limit yourself to how much detail you put into a song.
Hi Centrist, I hope all is going well. I thought this was an amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your work. I ended up using the piano solo and the soft piano in a rap instrumental. I will add a link below so you can check it out. Hopefully I didn't butcher your work too much. Opinions would be appreciated.
Very awesome man, I like this piece a lot. What I might suggest doing though is finding some strings to compliment the piece. Piano is an incredible instrument when used by itself, but I think in this track it needs a certain type of fullness that is apparently lacking. Try digging around my loops a bit more when you have some time and look for the same key and tempo. I forget where Olympus lays, but hopefully you'll find some.
on Olympus - Piano Solo by Centrist
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12134282
on Olympus - Piano Solo by Centrist
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12134282&q=hi