Just some constructive criticism
*Sounds very out of tune. Try to use "helpers" on your FL piano roll. Those show you the notes in a scale and please stick to just one scale at a time.
*There is no rhythm in this loop and the gross beat effects make the situation worse. Try to have a base melody that sounds good on its own then apply any filters that compliment the melody but don't over do it.
on Southside Trap by thunderflame2
*Sounds very out of tune. Try to use "helpers" on your FL piano roll. Those show you the notes in a scale and please stick to just one scale at a time.
*There is no rhythm in this loop and the gross beat effects make the situation worse. Try to have a base melody that sounds good on its own then apply any filters that compliment the melody but don't over do it.