ElectricSunrise83

Ok i can get you some tips you need to work on the mixing and mastering special on the mastering the track is to Loud. the track structure is weird ya know engage more with writing a track like Intro,Build up,drop,outro. you need to learn how to use effects like EQ,Limiter. and one of my biggest ones is try to make your track sound full not to overloaded but full listen what fits and what not. On this track most things aren't really fitin key wise learn more about notes and learn a little bit how to play piano it helps alol. so i know its much and harsh but i started like you and my tracks wasnt even hearable but i learned and now i can make tracks that people like and love to listen my bro stay with it if you take it serious you get far and will improve :) here a 2 songs from me a old one and a new one you can hear the difference https://soundcloud.com/realpolybius/frankjavcee-escape-polybius-remix

https://soundcloud.com/realpolybius/lemon

Yo can you send me a link i wanna listen :)