Not bad for a first track, man. I like the drum track that you added (The offset triplets specifically), but It's a little empty. I would add a bass instrument following the root notes of the chords in the sample of mine. The notes are C, F, C, E, F, / C, F, C, E, D. After that, maybe try layering some other instruments over the chords to make for a thicker sound. If you like the simple style of the whole thing, that's fine too. Just an idea. Keep on and I'm glad that you liked the loop!
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