Just some constructive criticism
*Sounds very out of tune. Try to use "helpers" on your FL piano roll. Those show you the notes in a scale and please stick to just one scale at a time.
*There is no rhythm in this loop and the gross beat effects make the situation worse. Try to have a base melody that sounds good on its own then apply any filters that compliment the melody but don't over do it.
on Southside Trap by thunderflame2
Here's my beat with it https://soundcloud.com/deeznay/sampled90bpm
on Southside Trap by thunderflame2
*Sounds very out of tune. Try to use "helpers" on your FL piano roll. Those show you the notes in a scale and please stick to just one scale at a time.
*There is no rhythm in this loop and the gross beat effects make the situation worse. Try to have a base melody that sounds good on its own then apply any filters that compliment the melody but don't over do it.
on Southside Trap by thunderflame2