Can't review your track, as I don't really understand this style, but it sounds good to me. The end is a bit less in the meter than the first part though.
I've included it to "produce" a song my daughter and her friend made (in electronic dance music style). It's only a private thingy, so nothing commercial, but your track does have more power in the lower registers and a more interesting rhythm than the others I heard.
Thanks a lot. I assure you, it's on rhythm. If you want to hear how it sounds to a beat, go to my track section and listen to "Message" Thanks for the listen and the review.
on Message Acapella by MusicByManic
I've included it to "produce" a song my daughter and her friend made (in electronic dance music style). It's only a private thingy, so nothing commercial, but your track does have more power in the lower registers and a more interesting rhythm than the others I heard.
Thanks for sharing.