Like the piano and chord progression! The drop loses me a bit. The melody is pretty intense and the bass is lacking. For a song like this the energy comes from that deep bass. The melody doesn't need to be fast and crazy, just catchy and easy to remember. Not hating, just throwing advice out there. Keep creating! It can only make you better!
on Above the clouds by 0Equinox0
https://soundcloud.com/subpoint-music/above-the-clouds