Nice song, very nice singing, congrats!
My take: https://soundcloud.com/p-ss-96960174/floating-featuring-bkk767
Left you a bit of space so you can try for (maybe, just an idea) a more uplifting chorus (with what you have being verse and pre-chorus). You're singing in G major (pentatonic), maybe get a bit higher and modulate to D major?
on Floating by bigkk767
My take: https://soundcloud.com/p-ss-96960174/floating-featuring-bkk767
Left you a bit of space so you can try for (maybe, just an idea) a more uplifting chorus (with what you have being verse and pre-chorus). You're singing in G major (pentatonic), maybe get a bit higher and modulate to D major?