The song as a whole is good but there are certain things that don't go super well together. First, the kick drum is a bit stale and sounds out of place. Either the key or the extended bass. Maybe try a simple clean kick that cuts through the mix. Second, the Acapella sounds out of time.
on Pages of my Past FULL Acapella by FarishaMusic
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z15b-jJAuvY
on Equinox - Torn Asunder by 0Equinox0
Thanks for your nice work. I hope you like it.
on Above the clouds by 0Equinox0
I made some arrangements taking into account the suggestions. I hope you like it :)
https://youtu.be/90tNNbqjYNk
on Above the clouds by 0Equinox0
Firstly thank you for this nice work. Your voice and your acapella are beautiful. I hope you keep sharing. I'd like to work with you if you like it.