I'll be the 1st here to give yousomething constructive... you have a wonderful voice, and great potential... I don't know the instrumental for ur lyrics u used... but this could easily be a good song, if you just switched the verse up from the course.... your harmony sounds the same the entire track, and well... simply doesnt keep one interested... it sounded like a lullaby with its repative style... so if u switched up the flow some, it would really be something.
on lets get high by bachuss
on Tonight Acapella by StephanieKay