The intro and verse are good. I think the drop needs a very defined kick and bass, like Melbourne Bounce. It's a bit muddy, simple eq cut and boost. Maybe add some light distortion and stereo width to the synths, some of them sound a bit lifeless and flat. Hope you can take something out of this.
on Equinox - Last One To Die by 0Equinox0
is not complete but i think have potential, give me a feedback. Regads!