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Hello,
here's a little jammer I made with your cool lyrics. Let me know what you think when you get a chance: https://soundcloud.com/sugarcanefamily/up-in-the-air-unreleased

Peace
Sean

ps - would you mind if i submitted this track to house labels? thanks!

Hey man, I downloaded your stuff, and decided to make some stuff out of it!

Check it out :) https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/90358

them dudes lack vision little playa ,its the bomb,im sending you a track right right now, keep spittin,one love,daymonpenick!

Justin, is it you?

just a tip:
ryhmes are a poem
a poem is a story
a story is a series of events that are linked.
it doesn't have to be something thats happened to you. so it can be your own fiction. a dream or whatever. thats why aussie hiphop is so good, when they get it right... your awesome and everyone else can ##### it

i think thats pretty cool man, just remember that everyones a critic on this site. never say die. what software do you use for your vocals bro? my music is a little different too, just by the way i put it together. music is an art not a system or gateway to become famous. because fame is usually bought these days in no certain terms. keep at it

It ain't that bad, work on some rhymes & flow. And you off in space and a lil hard to follow (random). I'd sugest www.rhymezone.com it's helps out for a beginner lyricist such as myself.

I'd quite like to work with your voice: I'd like to hear you singing, though, rather than rapping.

Here's a link to a track I recently set to music and recorded (it's an original acapella by mhyst from this very site). Think you could sing something along those lines - slow, tuneful and coherent? You write the lyrics, if like it I'll work it into a final track.

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/81080

It sounds mad random but it ight.

u have alot to do bro.the rap is stocking and wired.more flow and better rimes and it can be good