joekejoukejelle

I'd love to hear you upload more stuff, maybe with fewer effects and more original lyrics. Challenge yourself to rhyme with double or triple syllables, and in a different form other than at the end of every other sentence. Maybe try rhyming every mid sentence and every end sentence. Or every third sentence, with an extended emphasis on the rhyming word.

I enjoyed this style, has an indie feel. Your vocals are quite nice.

joekejoukejelle replied 12th Sep 2013 - 12 years ago

Thank you for your comment JJ Weekz.
I know exactly what you mean.
I write in with a lot styles and for this one, it's almost poetry right ;)
It's a story where I didn't found it important to rhyme the first and the third or the second and fourth words.
However, my next upload will be more your style!

Did you managed to compose something with this?

Thanks again!

agent00minimal 28th Aug 2013 17:58 - 12 years ago

on Underground Statements by joekejoukejelle

ty for vocals! :D

agent00minimal 28th Aug 2013 16:03 - 12 years ago

on Underground Statements by joekejoukejelle

https://soundcloud.com/agent-00minimal/alex-maier-agent-00minimal-the

joekejoukejelle replied 28th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks a lot! Good job.
I realy love the beat you composed!

Thanks again

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