very sorrowful, get alive vocals! although they do get slightly pushed down a peg or two when the beat comes in, but the beat is swell so it doesnt matter! nice track i enjoyed listening! gr8 vocals, gr8 vibe!
this track makes me want to grab my boyfriend and take him for some dancehall jazz dancing! fresh and funky, admitantly its not something i would normally listen to, but its good for the soul, calming too!
normally 'rock music' isnt somethin i'd listen to but i am enjoying your track you can tell you both put hard work into this and its great in every angle, sounds like it could be a classic!
edit ..well i do like a fair bit of rock, its just somethin i havent listened to in a long time! i'm more of a letters-to-cleo person, ram jam, metallica etc..still brill track i enjoyed!
Thanks Taratoxic for your review. I thought about beats but I've only just got round to playing along with the metronome so my tracks here on looperman are a bit beat-erratic, more ad-lib...or human as somebody once said. Beats are not my strong point but I have a few ideas in need of a good drum track, and I've done a few collabs here on loopsland so if you have any ideas in the beat dept. I'm up for a collab..
ooo saw samples, nice! me and my boyfriend were actually saying the other day that those kinda samples bring a sorta scare factor to a track, nicely used for sure..
Ok you where on the featured so i clicked to listen!
Nice bassy synths running through and the beat is smooth along with the hihats, very groovy and funky, Very well layed out.. vocal samples go well too woooob wooooooob .. love it, faved.
Ok you where on the featured so i clicked to listen!
Nice bassy synths running through and the beat is smooth along with the hihats, very groovy and funky, Very well layed out.. vocal samples go well too woooob wooooooob .. love it, faved.
VERY well done, totally enjoyed from start to finish, magical trance!! those honkytonk piano riffs are pure, really nice..faved!
p.s i also uploaded a new track today hope you can check it!
well put together for your first track , ever.
obviously everyone has to start from somewere,,but its nicely put together, healthy hint here though with your reversed snares try and bring them in about 4 bars before a crash so they meet in the middle, buildup to crash kinda thing..all in all good work!
oo nice track here, vocals are fab, this is the better style of electro! bassy and acidic and the vocals compliment it well, a dancefloor rocker! faved
EDIT --> well, i can guide you on mastering, as its a brill track and well worth calling your own lol...have you tried layering some of your basslines? it can bring them out without effecting other sounds in the track..thats what i do with alot of my instruments cos sometimes in transactions something either fades or comes really loud so layering is best foot forward!
thanx gurl... Im actually not satisfied with the EQing and mastering on this track. Would you be interested in mastering this for me in exchange for considering it a collab and a link to your trax or just out of the kindness of your heart lol? I just think the vocals are not as present and clear as they could be and the bassline is eating up some of the vocal's frequencies. I use FL 8 as well.
nice work here, nice how you have improvised the vocals, good job, nice fresh bangin tune! synths are catchy, beats all good...transactions are smooth...faved!
Thanx m8 for your comments. I've decided to start uploading here as up to now I've been active on Dance-Industries.com. However since the D.I. ratings don't really reflect the quality of the tracks submitted and their new web-layout is riddled with bugs and non-fixes I've felt somewhat fed-up with it. Breo recommended this site to me...So here I am!
i agree with D_avg, its a real head bobbin tune, i really think the FX you have used to transact from one section to another are good, and the 'breath' vocal is a nice touch too..
i agree with blunt on this one, deffinatly some deeper saw bass would bring it even more to life, sorta sounds hip hop, i guess cos of the strings used, nice uplifting track here!
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Great feed back,THANK YOU! I raised the vocals a lil more to get them out front. It sounds much! better this way thanx. DRE/DSP
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edit ..well i do like a fair bit of rock, its just somethin i havent listened to in a long time! i'm more of a letters-to-cleo person, ram jam, metallica etc..still brill track i enjoyed!
Cheers
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Nice bassy synths running through and the beat is smooth along with the hihats, very groovy and funky, Very well layed out.. vocal samples go well too woooob wooooooob .. love it, faved.
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Nice bassy synths running through and the beat is smooth along with the hihats, very groovy and funky, Very well layed out.. vocal samples go well too woooob wooooooob .. love it, faved.
I can only hope to improve...
I'll return the fav. As soon as I ge the chance too...having dial up suks lol. I can only browse the web on my fone too, so that isn't helping haha.
Happy producing to u =)
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p.s i also uploaded a new track today hope you can check it!
i will check your new one...
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obviously everyone has to start from somewere,,but its nicely put together, healthy hint here though with your reversed snares try and bring them in about 4 bars before a crash so they meet in the middle, buildup to crash kinda thing..all in all good work!
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EDIT --> well, i can guide you on mastering, as its a brill track and well worth calling your own lol...have you tried layering some of your basslines? it can bring them out without effecting other sounds in the track..thats what i do with alot of my instruments cos sometimes in transactions something either fades or comes really loud so layering is best foot forward!
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