A little bit of mastering with the vocals might make them work a lot better. Try playing with their pitch a bit to get them closer to being in key. A few effects might also work to cover up small imperfections that remain.
Overall the track is quite good, but that one loop which just reapeats ad infinitum is a bit much. If you can find even one more alternative to that loop it would help sell this much better
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