juankar

I like it! It's made me move in a gentle way, not at all jarring. Congratulations.

It couldn't have been expressed better. Plus, it has a catchy melody that draws you in. But I think we all are, and we also treat others a bit like ghosts. The classic saying, "We don't know what we have until it's gone." Good job.

I agree with everything that's been said before. I can't give you my opinion on mixing or mastering, because I don't even know how to do it for my own tracks, haha. But what I do know is that what I hear sounds good; it sounds clear, crisp, and has a well-defined rhythm. I think it's a very good foundation for creating a great track, as others have mentioned, adding lyrics that draw the listener into the story you tell. I think you're doing a good job.

I liked it. I found it a very complex composition; I wouldn't know where to begin to create something like that, haha. It's lucky to have people here with years of experience who can offer their advice. Good work!

This is great!

I loved it! I think it turned out perfectly; it seems like the voice and the music have always been together. A perfect match. Congratulations!

Clap, clap, clap... (applause)
Spectacular, like everything you do. And I love the sound you achieve; it feels like I'm at a live performance, like you're right there in front of me.
I'm going to SoundCloud right now to listen to it.
Congratulations on the great music you do and the sensitivity of your songs.

When I started listening, I was about to skip to the next track, but the more I listened, the more hooked I became, and it stayed that way until the end. It was like I was being hypnotized by those background sounds and that voice in the foreground. I'm really glad I listened to the whole thing because I liked it. Great job!

Hi.
I just answered your question about how I wrote the lyrics and vocals for "Breathing in the Light." But it says I can only write 300 characters, and I'm not sure if you'll receive the whole message. So I'm also answering here, which allows 3000 characters.

Since I don't speak English, I used Chat GPT to create English lyrics, changing the words from my original Spanish idea so that it would rhyme in English, but still retain the spirit of my Spanish song: feeling at peace and safe with another person, leaving behind fears and inner darkness, feeling like you're letting go of negativity, ultimately finding inner peace.
Then, using those lyrics in SUNO, I told them I wanted an a cappella female voice for a chill house track, the chord progression is B-Ebm-Db-G#m, tempo 120 BPM, each chord lasts 8 bars. A soft, ethereal, and sweet female voice, with a warm and emotive tone. The performance is intimate and expressive, with whispery textures and clear pronunciation.

Structure:

Intro (light vocal textures)
Verse (soft and melodic)
Pre-chorus (slightly rising energy)
Chorus (catchy, emotional, uplifting hook)
Outro (fading, atmospheric vocalizations)

Avoid heavy vibrato or aggressive delivery. Keep it smooth, calm, and hypnotic.

It didn't come out right the first time, but I finally got the result I was looking for.
Then it was a matter of adapting the musical base I already had and playing around with the sounds.

I hope this helps.

Amazing track! I loved the power of the percussion, the guitars. And the ending with that heartbeat... perfect. Great job.

I think it's a good song. I hope someone can help you; I'd love to hear the result. I'm not adding anything because it would only make it worse, haha. Anyway, I've already downloaded it. Congratulations!

I love its power. Listening to it has given me energy for the rest of the day, haha. Congratulations, you make great music.

Thank you so much for taking the time and trouble to give me all these explanations. I've already downloaded Sitala to start using it. And I'm blown away by all the effects available for JSFX (I didn't know what it was). I just tried "JS: Ping Pong Pan" on a track and I loved it. I'll see if I can gradually learn how to use these things. I learned what automation was in the last song, and I only used it to control the volume of some sounds and prioritize the vocals.
Thanks again.

I really liked it! The rhythm and voice are captivating.

I loved it! Especially those effects with such definition, that stereo effect, particularly the percussionI have to learn how to do that. The voice narration is the icing on the cake. Great job.

As I told you in my first message, I never listen to Trap music, but thanks to you I'm getting into it. I like what you do. Congratulations!

As always, a fantastic track! Catchy song, special performance, and perfect production. Congratulations!

Another fantastic track! And that flute is enchanting. Could it be a snake charmer's flute? Haha. Congratulations!

You haven't just added a few things. The song is beautiful with that piano that blends perfectly with the voice. Congratulations.

I liked how the music and vocals blended. Your creations are so rich in instrumentation.
I don't know English either (I regret not having learned it) and I always have to translate everything with Google, haha. I downloaded your song, separated the vocals, and transcribed them with Audacity. Then I translated it into Greek, which I assume is what you wanted.
Here it is in both English and Greek.
Best regards.

I first you be, have I ever?
With simple size nasty skies,
Crying grey skies lonely, silent cries
I was not the time when you've got to stay
I see in your eyes Beijing days not today
But it makes you crazy, your silence is pain
Your smile is so broken front, your body chain
I first you be, but surely, but surely
I first you be, but I'm not wanting to go
I see the show, I'll stay and show, by and out alone
But it makes you better, I'll find you today
But it makes you smile, you'll look at it your way
I try to be angry, close me to all you get
When you left me, fast to death
Smile, we would be friends, I love you, baby, I love you, baby

Awesome track! I couldn't stop dancing. I really liked the keyboard. And of course, it's already downloaded, haha. Congratulations!

A moving story, narrated and sung in an incredible way. Everything togetherthe music, the voicestirs you deeply when you listen to it. It's no wonder it's so successful; it deserves it. And unfortunately, we live in a world where if someone dies tragically, it becomes an individual tragedy and receives a lot of media attention. But when thousands of innocent people lose their lives, we almost normalize it. As a society, we don't realize the tragedy of each of those deaths, especially when it's often due to the decisions of those who are never exposed to losing their lives. It's a shame that this world is getting worse and worse; there's less and less humanity in people. The only glimmer of hope is when you read about or meet people through these media, miles away, on the other side of the world, who think like you, who value life, who respect others. I hope there are more and more of us.

Congratulations on the song and its success.
Best regards, Juan Carlos.

Great song! The sound is crystal clear, the rhythm is good, and Odarka voice, which I realize is always a recipe for success, is fantastic. Congratulations!

A great track to listen to. I love how the vocals blend perfectly with the music.

Another track with an incredible sound. It's over 3 minutes long but it feels short, haha, I think that's a good sign. Congratulations.