Hey Larry, nice track. Sounds like this will be a winner for your album. I notice around :47 that the lead vocal volume sets behind the background vocals. It would sound better if it matched the level of :15. This track is going to be tight when you adjust.
Thanks Ronabo, i appreciate you taking a listen to this one, its just a rough draft as of now, nothing been mixed on it, some how that vocal got turned down, but good artist can hear what needs work in a song, i appreciate that my friend, Larry
This is a good start Saidx. It would be nice to hear a few more instruments or elements to it. The quality of the drums sounds good. I may have to checkout FL Studio. Thanks for sharing.
Nice background effects and love the variety of elements you present. The drum off beat is cool but it seems a tad bit too off. It could be me though. I love the track though so great job! FAV.
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Thanks for comin out showing some love on the track , one of my favorite tracks I produced.
Glad you enjoy, more to come, thanks.
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Hi Neuromancer56, I really like all of the elements of this track. The instruments sounds great. At times I feel like the organ and piano licks at the end are not placed in the right spot. It still sounds cool though. A few tweaks here and there and I say you have yourself a hit!
Hi ronabo, Thanks for the excellent suggestions. I didn't like the piano toward the end either so I got rid of it and put in a little more flute in it's place. That sounds a lot better. I also took the delay effect off of the organ, and replaced it with reverb, so it sounds a little tighter. Let me know what you think.
Thanks :) I actually used Maschine 2 also ! I used a sample for the voice to start. Hite up whenever if you want to colab :)
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I created this with cubase10 which contains follows.
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Glad you enjoy, more to come, thanks.
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