DannyBOLO

you have constructed a very good lyrical arrangement. flow is laid back, fits the beat, both verses relate back to the chorus. story is easy to picture which to me means it crosses over that line from music and lyrics to a song. good job.

B.O.L.O.

GotCheeve replied Unknown

appreciate it. i'm still new to constructing songs and choruses, i'm a work in progress i haven't been doing this that long. thanks for the review.

DannyBOLO 17th Oct 2008 01:53 - 16 years ago

on Slow Grind by Kevo

i have something else in mind to drop over this beat, with your permission.

DannyBOLO 13th Oct 2008 04:47 - 16 years ago

on There's A Hero In Everyone by Ciko

just uploaded a close to finished version
title "be me "beat by Just Clownz Productions"
please review

B.O.L.O.

DannyBOLO 13th Oct 2008 00:26 - 16 years ago

on There's A Hero In Everyone by Ciko

i listened to this beat and had lyrics in 5 minutes. i would like your permission to rap over this.

title "be me" coming soon?

B.O.L.O.
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thank you. i will keep you posted

B.O.L.O.

Ciko replied Unknown

If someone got an idea I will never stop him to realize them! So Bolo do ur thang on it! Burn the Beat down if you want to! Or u let us meltin away like ice in the sunshine! Its up to u!

Let me know when this is finished!

Greetz

Ciko
Just Clownz Productions

DannyBOLO 12th Oct 2008 02:21 - 16 years ago

on How you work it Wes Wes by MosReQuest

seriously, if i spit on this track. the crime rate would go up. i like it, matter of fact i like quite a few of ur tracks. hit me up if u wanna make somethin happen. check my latest

DannyBOLO 13th Sep 2008 15:41 - 16 years ago

on ???? by jjy

wheres the full version?

jjy replied Unknown

i guess i can start workin on it lol. check back in a couple of days and i'll throw it up

DannyBOLO 11th Sep 2008 17:19 - 16 years ago

on Afghanisation At Ease by Jack_Spear

id like to rap over that

Jack_Spear replied Unknown

thnx for the feedback, id like to hear what u got!!!
then when ur done send it on looper so i can hear it
One Blood

DannyBOLO 4th Sep 2008 19:38 - 16 years ago

on V.S. Very Smooth by Kevo

i like it

DannyBOLO 3rd Sep 2008 17:55 - 16 years ago

on Ain't Nuthin' But a Dj Thang by phasturbo

smooth beat, somethin to walk to.

DannyBOLO 26th Aug 2008 17:12 - 16 years ago

on The Challenge by DJJBOI

got my attention. like to hear the final. keep doin what u do, ur doin it well.

DannyBOLO 15th Jul 2008 14:34 - 17 years ago

on Chords by ShogunGhostwriter

i like this beat.

ShogunGhostwriter replied Unknown

yo, spit some lyrics. I have been testing some lyrics of my own for this track but it's to long for one voice I think.

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