Like the track. Some bass or strings would be a good addition. Feels like something I could tell a story or just do the samba to. The guitar gives it that Brazillian feel. Ya know1!!
Yo the track sounds dope. Reminds me of some old Eminem ish. I know what you mean about touching up the production. Your vocals are pretty good. I think your voice could use a bit more inflection here and there. The rhymes sound a bit like a free style. All in all, not bad for a rough cut. Keep it up!!! P.S. If you need beats, I'll be selling beatz on my myspace page soon. www.myspace.com/ils7
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