rabbersound

Really like this, even i think Is more house/tech house than pop but ok i understand why you chose pop cause of the BPM's change at certain point. Whatever i send u a message, hope u answer me and u wanna collab too. If yes, i think you are good to produce tech/house genre expecially for drums and rythms, that are perfect for make the listener wanna move the body! I think i'm also good in producing techno, even if your style and Mood are the opposite of mine. I prefer to Prod tech house at 124 bpm (my favourite BPM ahah) with an "evil dark phrygian scale full of drums sometimes lil swinged " Mood! Ahah but Bro, we have to do and ITALIAN COLLAB in here! And bring up the italian prod style honor!

Ahah yes Bro i ready salvatore and i don't think there are a lot of salvatore in other part of the world, in italian too i live in Varese, lombardia, 1 hour near Milano. I Will write you Just now in message section here, Hope you wanna talk a Little. Good to see in not the only One italian here in LP ahah

Wow this Song Is great! Cool style never Listen to here and only 4/5 similar songs style in italian trap scene, it sounds good!

Bro check out your mail and WP i send u and tell u something good ;)

Incredibile track as Always

I like it, but you absolutely have to change the pad/chorus melody because it's wrong, the harmony isn't right compared to the violin's, which is perfectly fine. I recommend using the first four notes of the violin melody and making them the same length as the ones I used for the chorus, instead of the ones you used. It will sound good like this. Then I would add drums and vary them in some places for 4/8 bars. If you change these two things, the beat becomes impeccable and not bad at all.

I always appreciate big projects, as I sometimes feel compelled to mention when I'm working on a project that's slowly getting bigger. I'm very organized in my projects, and for a trap song, I divide each individual sound into its own line and then its automations if necessary, and so on for each individual sound. On average, I use 30-35 lines (in the arrangement section). In some trap songs, I've used 40-45, while in a couple of techno songs, I've used 55-60. I can tell you, however, about this beat, not knowing if the general dissonance is intentional (but I don't think so), that you have a lot to learn and revise on the harmony, because there is nothing correct here on a harmonic level... I think you wanted to make a melodic trap beat, but I didn't perceive the sense of the beat... except that perhaps your intent was to represent Freudian mental distress depicted in contemporary music with a trap arrangement... if that were the case, you would be a visionary artist whose art is refined and complex, for connoisseurs and admirers of contemporary artistic reinterpretations of twentieth-century themes...

Wow, that's incredible, bro. Besides being Italian like me, you're the first one to tell me you use Bluetooth headphones. I swear, I'm not the only one. I actually use SBS Air Kab Max headphones. Bluetooth headphones that are definitely much lower quality than the Ari Pods. So, if you want, listen to some of my beats that I uploaded here, so you can understand that the type of headphones used doesn't really matter that much. My mixes aren't perfect, but I think they're good.

Finally, an Italian! Comment in English because it won't let me write it in Italian... Yes, you're on the right track. I'd improve the drums, and in some places I'd vary the melody and add melodic sounds, just for variety. I don't know why I can't hear the 808 through my phone speakers.

I replay like Ur batteries in every beat u upload, they are perfect in rythms and quality. I wanna collab with u, you wanna too? If yes, please write me!

Really like the drums, and very beautiful the atmosphere u create with that pad synth sound and Melody. Nice beat.

Those cuts are Crazy!

Very cool!

Damn Bro! I feel your Beats are perfect for what i wanna rap on!!! I really think this Is the perfect sound for the story i wanna tell, only wait to buy a mic or have some Money to rec something but i Will use 100% this and the other u send me!!! Damn you are growing up too much fast!

Wow! I take inspiration from movies to create a beat, but you create the movie directly! The type of scale you used is beautiful, along with the chords and the sound, I really perceived a future mood but in the chill, like commercial hip hop like the "Vevo" music video. The vocals are beautiful. Overall, it reminds me a bit of the Black Eyed Peas style and sound.

Hi bro, I saw you've listened to almost all the tracks I've uploaded, so I looked at your profile. Then I saw it's from 16 years ago, and that you uploaded this one track the same year... My conclusion is that you can time travel!!! Hahaha I mean, producing trap in 2008 is crazy, either you're time traveling or you're a visionary! I'm still impressed that you've taken an interest in my tracks, thank you, I'm honored!

Continue It, i likes It It have potential. I think you can add a Little female vocal in this piano intro After the First 8 bars, then togheter with the vocal add a chord pad, so when the drums starts, create a piano Melody in minor scale arpeggio with a low pass filter on It, with only kick bass and only Little parts of che complete drums loop, so after 4/8 bars to create a fluid and continuity effect leave the low oass filter to the arpeggio like to hear also high freq. , add this piano Melody you dome in this snipp, vito the vocal and the complete drums loop. This Is only my personal taste but Is a concrete good idea for this, if you wanna collab on that write me im Happy to add something of me and tell you some hints and skills, if u think i can help u. Waiting your answer!

Nah Bro really also the drums sounds and rythms are perfect on those sound, voices, also great choose of the male voice, its Melody Is perfectly connectend to the Guitar Harmony and Mood, and the Guitar Melody, variations, arpeggios and in complex all the Guitar Melody Is incredibile. Perfectly done, It really remind me to a bandolero Gangsta soundtrack of some Netflix series set in Mexico or ghetto's in Spain! Love It i think i Will Listen to It maybe around 10 times from now ahah!!!

Damn Bro! The Guitar arpeggio Is something incredibile, this Is the real bandolero Gangsta soundtrack! Really like It!

Damn Bro! The Guitar arpeggio Is something incredibile, this Is the real bandolero Gangsta soundtrack! Really like It!

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This is the most complex, high-quality, long, and unique trap beat. Studied and curated down to the last detail, you can feel that you carefully selected each sound to play well with the others in the concatenation of the various sections. Then there's the type of harmony and scale that I love, perfect for production with this type of electronic and subtle yet effective sounds that I love, and also great care in creating different yet similar melodies, which, assigned thus to different sounds, created exactly this. In all of this, you have definitely created a bomb of a beat because you have 100% created your own style, and in my opinion with this beat you could have even created a new subgenre of trap. What a hit!

Nice beat, brother, you've improved it! I imagined a futuristic atmosphere like a hyper-technological, functional city, so not a dystopia, but a utopia. But who knows, maybe it won't be, especially in the final part with the entrance of the piano playing chords that are very reminiscent of jazz! I really feel like it would be a good interlude between scenes for a hypothetical Netflix series set in the future!

Those melodies really hypnotize me! They're a bit repetitive, but really beautiful, for my taste, if you find the right pattern of variation of the melodies, for me it's really a great hip hop hit. I also really like the drums, which are really beautiful, I can feel that you did everything yourself, every sound, without using loops, and it's a great job in my opinion.

ok bro I absolutely have to apologize then because your reasoning is more than correct, which I hadn't thought of at all.