vaetle

the first thing I would start with is the positive: the melody is great and you have good build ups.
constructive improvement critics: the kick is kinda boring it got no power. if you're using FL studio I advice you to download the vengeace pack with kick samples, hihats, claps, etc. they are REALLY helpful and you can change them urself.
the mainlead SYNTH SOUND is also very weak try more layers and set the EQUO in the mixer to a mid freq setting.
but exept from that a little variation and experience ur good to go ;)

this one had a lot of power in the kick. wich I really liked. try to get some more system over the sounds and more variation is always nice ;)
try some other synths and you have it.
great track :D
time will always give you improvement ;) just look at my tracks from bottom to the top. and see the difference ;)
have nice day
-Stelph (vaetle)

edit: the fading kick in and out wasnt so good. I loved the heavy kick. imo keep it there :D

I like this one. I got the feelin of a sceene of someone runnin from the cop or something ^^ many nice sounds wich match perfectly :D THUMB UP (Y)
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W-O-W. you are incredible to make a song out of a song in a dream. realy nice song too. I really like it. good work

the first I could think of was basshunter in the opening :D really NICE track. bet you gonna be a pro DJ someday :D (if u arent already? :D great great great sound :)

its awesome. BANGING bassdrum. I didnt like the changes so much. you could have created a melody to the bass. THAT would be A-W-E-S-O-M-E
anyways keep it up ;) thumb up (Y)

really good work to your first techno song :D
I felt it very relaxing to listen on. I like it :D

very good work here. gets very funny pictures in my head when I listen to it =D
nicely done. looking forward =)

this ine wasnt very good. no elements only that boring bass and rum that goes the same all the way. its a good sounding bass. but this couldve been done in a minute dude =( sry didnt like it

yea sure mrrobot. u can make remix =D
thanks =)

thx =)

thx. ye I know I should have some variation =D so Im working on it atm:D

hopes the second edition becomes better then ;)

thanks:)

this was my first song ever tough. so it could have been better:)
but thanks you would have something to look forward to :);)

naice song. but a little short :)