great idea as always...at around 1.08 you should change that snare close (that's too simple) and at the end of the drum section there is no closing cymbal with kick...the concept though very good, this is a short, heartfelt piece...
progressive lounge...very cool...those synth solos in the middle of the song are outstanding, tunes are fantastic choices and the drum is on the groovy side...I hear, feel and hope it's not a silly thing but one of those drum sound is pushed at the left side?! great idea...
Thank you a lot!i like your loops!we can try to create something togather!my profile on souncloud is Nevinen..i am just new to looperman!its great resourse with a lot of talanted people!
amazing riff collection on the rhythm guitars again...though, here I miss the structure of the song...it sounds like you only threw those awesome riffs together...concept...
all in all, it could be a heavy punishment with some bass, little producing and vocs...not much...:-)
Thank you! I did all the backups on the track. When Jim comes over he usually plays a lot louder than I do when I record guitar. Along with his attack on the strings, it seems to make a big difference, made me rethink playing, recording and mixing guitars a little different.
We're working on a couple more and I ask him not to work the parts out so they sound rehearsed. He works on them a little to get the feel of the track and as I like to get his first instinctual musical ideas recorded, we open a new audio track and let him rip and keep doing it till we both feel we got something. Every track is real good but different in it's own way. It's fun to work with him and watch him play, humbling, yeah...
I very much like this tune...cool flow, pads, groovy are all good choices...it is absolutely written for spech or vocs or together...not much tips on it cause it's cool on it's own, maybe some kinda lead instru (like sax or a distorted!!! guitar for some parts) surprisingly...:-)
very cool guitar tune and play...very fat tune and super feel play...that electronic background doesn't annoying...a bit reminds me to Stabbing Westward...
Hahaha
Well your the second to telle me there is no hip hop here
Just 80's Funk vibes
You may be right ?
May be because i can hear a rapper on this ?
Well neverminds... But thx for your feedback !
Thanks Danke, I am glad you like the track, my music isn't liked by everyone so I appreciate your compliments and the download. Thanks again for the listen!!
this is extremely cool...that James Bond like theme at around 0.30 til 0.45 than at the end that piano play from 3.15 are too good as your voice? too...like the drum play and the progressivity on this pop like song...hats off, Danke
hey this is so dry and this means cool...those rhythm guitars though very underrated in volume and for me the drums are too harsh...but if you don't calculate this, I welcome this 'live' music here...
I don't get your last part where you said make another part can you explain. I love feedback. If you mean add more their is its on my soundcloud on the description of this song. Loop only lets me add 20/25 mb so this is a sample I had
you have your own brilliant style...this can be divisive, of course but I'm on the melancholy side...I love your compositions, little arts all the time...
Hey Danke,
It's definitely a melancholy track.But I didn't want it to be a depressing dirge. More of a pensive, romanticised reflection on mortality. Wait... I just realised how douchey that sounds.
what a very good song is this...fantastic guitars? in the chorus...the whole one is just floating, waving with that magical vocs...is it a remix or it's your song?
Now, this is very cool...the chorus is outstanding, the riffage and the groovy too...only thing is the vocs's tune under the verses...it needs a slight reverb or stg like that, it's very dry...on my humble opinion...but all in all, great, frustrated tracky :-)
Hey Danke,
Thanks for the review my friend. Gone back to both my rock tracks and redone the vocals. Tinkered around with the levels and effects. all the best Mik
on Just Melody by DivadyAlbum1
handshake, Danke
I compose by pure instinct without really being expert so I miss a lot of experience.
on Lonely by Wahx
congrats and handshake, Danke
on icecream by silverman
thanx for this upload mr. silverman
handshake, Danke
Thankyou for your kind words.
on Chill by medryder
handshake, Danke
on Nevinen Buy It Now feat Subliminal Girl by Nevinen
hats off, Danke
on Demo Feedback by Mario
well done, Danke
At first I had Julian Casablancas in mind but I think Liverpool Accent would sound better xD
Valdez
on Past Time Lets goy by Haxyi
all in all, it could be a heavy punishment with some bass, little producing and vocs...not much...:-)
handshake, Danke
on Snake Eyes ft Jimmy Stiles by theHumps
raw and dry...it comes from the viscera...very, very cool...
that guitar tone is too good...like plug in, volume max. and play...
vocs are also good, specially in the chorus where you are the backgrounder for yourself, I guess...
all in all, one of your best, handshake, Danke
We're working on a couple more and I ask him not to work the parts out so they sound rehearsed. He works on them a little to get the feel of the track and as I like to get his first instinctual musical ideas recorded, we open a new audio track and let him rip and keep doing it till we both feel we got something. Every track is real good but different in it's own way. It's fun to work with him and watch him play, humbling, yeah...
Cheers!
Wayne
on Last Moment by DivadyAlbum1
if I were you I would only change the drums in the chorus, specially instead of hihat I would use ride...that's all, it is simply brilliant...
handshake, Danke
i go see for the drums with rides
on vibemp3 by Varsuna
handshake, Danke
on The Mordred Epiphany by pukwudgie7
congrats and handshake, Danke
on Past Time-Good Time by Haxyi
Kinda Nirvana/Alice in Chains mix. Guitar tune is too good as the dirty drums. Just like on those lp's...
hail to you and to guard the flame. :-)
Handshake, Danke
on And you don t Stop NEEDS VOCAL by Indieground
hope you'll find someone...
handshake, Danke
Well your the second to telle me there is no hip hop here
Just 80's Funk vibes
You may be right ?
May be because i can hear a rapper on this ?
Well neverminds... But thx for your feedback !
on The Fall by ImproveWithError
Kyle
on Mahbod Karimi - Seda Bezan by Mahbodkarimi
on Demo Trak by Haxyi
great, short work...
handshake, Danke
on Thats what Ill Do by wemert
actually, it's not bad, vocs are brilliant but nothing special...
Danke
on Rideout of the hells angels by Nodog
handshake, Danke
on Chill vibes by Luis0908
but I like this state too...
handshake, Danke
Thanks Luis!
on Where the River Meets the Sea by toastedavalanche
handshake, Danke
It's definitely a melancholy track.But I didn't want it to be a depressing dirge. More of a pensive, romanticised reflection on mortality. Wait... I just realised how douchey that sounds.
Thanks for listening
TA
on How are you by sqrtofneg1
that background pad or stg like that is overpowered a bit but this is technically only...
the track is bloody brilliant...feeling, heart, groovy, a cup of coffee at the late night bar is there and your piano is outstanding...
hats off, Danke
on Sleepwalking City by BlancFroid
congrats and handshake, Danke
on chill hop by KaraineOfficial
thanx for the upload, handshake, Danke
on I Fool Myself - Miper by MusicxbyxPaul
it doesn't matter though, handshake, Danke
on Against the wall by skyrider
handshake, Danke
Thanks for the review my friend. Gone back to both my rock tracks and redone the vocals. Tinkered around with the levels and effects. all the best Mik