DrvanLansberg

Amsterdam, The Netherlands

Joined : 11th Aug 2011 - 15 years ago

Last Online : 20th Oct 2024 - 2 years ago

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DrvanLansberg 11th Jun 2014 08:10 - 12 years ago

on Give me the night featuring Pauline Wright by RichieWinn

Hi Richie,

First thing that comes into mind is the flawless mix. It is open en crisp and I really love what you've done. Just read the comment on the guitar, I think it has the perfect spot in the mix as it is, but I know that a lot is deciced by just taste.

Nice touch on the rim shot when the guitar is playing, gives a bit more power when needed.

If I would have to make up one comment, it would be on the EP. It plays the same chords in the same way during a big part of the track. It might be a noce addition to have it syncoped (is that the right word?) every now and then, so have it play a short chord on the 2nd 16th and a long one on the 4th or 5th.

Apart from that, flawless track. If it would be available in wav, I would download it imiediately :-)

Best, Doc

RichieWinn replied 11th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Doc

Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and post comments. I appreciate it.

Your view of the mix is exactly as I intended and "open and crisp" just hit the nail on the head for me. It's sometimes about less being more and keeping it simple. On that tack I guess the piano part does just sit there the whole way through and doesn't really go anywhere else so I take your point. Nice you notice the change in drum part over the solo too.

Contact me through the Loop if you want a wav file of the track. Happy to send it to you.

Thanks again.

Richie

DrvanLansberg 17th Nov 2013 10:32 - 12 years ago

on Aint Nobody Lovin Me But U feat Patricia Edwards by brotbackautomat

Just listened to this awsome track. It's a great way to use Patricia's vocals! Not predictable at all and that's why I like ot so much.

Nice open mix as well. If I may make one little suggestion, I feel that there's just a little bit too much high in the drum track. Maybe a bit of EQ tweeking may help. But that's really all I can think of right now.

Also I would love to hear a longer version of this track. Are you working on that as well?

Keep up the good work.

Best, Doc

brotbackautomat replied 17th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

thx for your comment...good point - after hearing my song again this also comes in my mind...i've overdone it in the search of a cracky edgy short snare while the rest of the drums suffer from that. i'm working on a housy version and some older stuff right now - maybe a longer version afterwards... regards P.

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