I like the trance bits, but I love the odd jangly synth pop sections more. It's a personal preference but I honestly think you could get away with building a 3-4 minute track around the synth pop parts, with maybe a trance 8-bar kicking in off the back of the chorus' or as a bridge, or even an outro. The 'Can I live my life' parts I can't get enough of, really catchy.
on Can I Live My Life by CalifKen