Very nice attempt for a firsttimer. I realy liked what i heard. I have only one comment :) and that's the little bit annoying rumble in the backgroud i gues that must be timpani's. Maybe you should work on this a bit. However GREAT STUFF!
And if you like classical music (for inspiration) check out one of my own attempts "Adagio in G by T. Albinoni" here on looperman.
definitely agree now on the timpani. i think it sounded better while i was making it but the drums really need to be clearer. im checking your piece right now. thanks for the listen and the reply
Ik heb je intro beluisterd en ik denk dat het zeker de moeite waard is om er meer energie in te steken.
De sound is sowieso vet OK en ook de spanningsopbouw van het nummer is goed. Ik zou alleen aan het eind van je intro iets eerder wat meer variatie er inbrengen om het echt boeiend te houden. :)
Klopt, de variatie is op dit moment wat ver te zoeken en de melodie komt er op dit moment wel heel abrupt in. Ben ook nog niet zo heel tevreden over de kick.
I love to hear those rockbased tracks. And this one is realy well done, especialy the organ you used sounds realy cool for me. Your music make me think on the music of "Ayreon" (Arjen Anthony Lucassen) That is meant as a huge compliment. :)
Thank you so much for your very kind review. I had awesome help from my collaborators that made this song so much better than my original version. Again, thank you.
/pmk
I love those strings. The tenson buildup is quite nice and i think that you've addded the strings a bit to late :) Because i think that this strings make your track more lively. But that's only my opinion :P
Overall, your track is very nice one. Well done.
Yes i can hear the Pink Floyd influence! Very creative.
Only there is one thing that annoyed me :), that is the creacking white noise. Was this your intention? For now enough critisism, The track as a whole i think it is a very good performance, i like it a lot. Mucho RESPECT!!!
that sound is a sample of the end of a twelve inch vinyl record that I looped and added to try to make it sound like an old sample from a record. guess it didn't have the intended effect, haha. O well. thanks for the praise tho.
Visions of "Mike Oldfield" i get when i listen to your comfortly relaxing music. And that is meant as a huge compliment!
Very good use of instruments and voices with a perfect mixing everything seems to be in balance. Superb job my friend must fave it.
Hi. Nice piece you have here. I'm impressed by the way you have expressed the pressure incresement while decending. You can almost feel it. Good job, well done.
Hi. I listened to a;; your tracks and i wanna tell you that you make awsome powerfull music my friend and i like that.
Only Choir X need some more tweaking and mastering :) to make it perfect. I think that the Bass Drum is the problem, it's to dominant. Put this a little more to the background.
Ein richtig tolles lied hast du gemacht, are you shure you are an amature musician? This song sounds realy awesome. Good lyrics, mixing, singing and so on! To be short, Exelent performance al the way. Respect.
Wow!!! This sounds very professional. I asume that you've made/sing/played the lyrics, voice and piano yourself. Great performance and mastering. I faved it for sure, what can i say more.
Djinn XS again. Don't be so hard to yourself. Because i think, you are much to modest about your voice. I think it sounds quite good! Despite the effects I still hear a warm voice with a good feel for timing.
In this track your voice fits perfectly, it's giving it exact the right tone /ambiance. Well done!, also for the lyrics with a story in it.
I loved what i've heard. Nice clear piece you have here. Only the end of it suprised me a little bit. Why did you cutoff so rude?
A well-intentioned advice:
Undress your track slowly and fade out for instance the bass-, drum- or melodyline. Then you get a much smoother end of your track(s)
i feel u man. about the sudden cut of, i stated it in the description that the track is not funny finished yet so the sudden end. sorry about that. but glad u liked it. thnx for the comment
This is very Professional work my friend. Right from the start it was suprising me, and it lasted untill the end, wich came much to soon. Respect mate.
on tears of time by georgededes1
Is the guitar played by yourself or is it a sample?
Hang on and keep them comming!
Regards, Djinn xs
on Peaks by CFactor
Very nice attempt for a firsttimer. I realy liked what i heard. I have only one comment :) and that's the little bit annoying rumble in the backgroud i gues that must be timpani's. Maybe you should work on this a bit. However GREAT STUFF!
And if you like classical music (for inspiration) check out one of my own attempts "Adagio in G by T. Albinoni" here on looperman.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Trance intro by Seaside
Ik heb je intro beluisterd en ik denk dat het zeker de moeite waard is om er meer energie in te steken.
De sound is sowieso vet OK en ook de spanningsopbouw van het nummer is goed. Ik zou alleen aan het eind van je intro iets eerder wat meer variatie er inbrengen om het echt boeiend te houden. :)
Kortom goed bezig jonge!
Greetz,
Djinn XS
Klopt, de variatie is op dit moment wat ver te zoeken en de melodie komt er op dit moment wel heel abrupt in. Ben ook nog niet zo heel tevreden over de kick.
Nou ja, ik zal eens verder gaan knutselen.
on I have no Ideas by 7th
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Angel in the ground Malumix ft Tacatta and Eshar by Kikajon
Greetz,
Djinn XS
/pmk
on TIMESHIFT Club Mix by Salkizar
Exelent job.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Alone by BearAustin
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Escape To The Universe by JWilson
Overall, your track is very nice one. Well done.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Floydian Slip by LordDice
Only there is one thing that annoyed me :), that is the creacking white noise. Was this your intention? For now enough critisism, The track as a whole i think it is a very good performance, i like it a lot. Mucho RESPECT!!!
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Celtic Harp by ThomBook
Very good use of instruments and voices with a perfect mixing everything seems to be in balance. Superb job my friend must fave it.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Thema Symphonica by WaPer
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Captain Nemos Nautilus diving into the abyss by ALXSIX
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on choir x by waansin
Only Choir X need some more tweaking and mastering :) to make it perfect. I think that the Bass Drum is the problem, it's to dominant. Put this a little more to the background.
And maybe a bit more reverb for the choir.
I like your music so keep them coming
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Hand In Hand by CDream
Tschüss,
Djinn Xs
on Solutions To Find - Dubstep Remix by lasttriedtherapy
The track is realy short because i wanna hear more of that!
Please, please find your solutions and make it longer ;-D
Untill that time i fave this one. I can't wait.
Tschüss,
DjinnXS
on A Real Man (Demo) by minette
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on So Blue by Nightingale
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Spread The Virus Drumstep 2011 by Alen9R
Greetz,
Djinn XS
Alen
on Stealing my mind by C69
Djinn XS again. Don't be so hard to yourself. Because i think, you are much to modest about your voice. I think it sounds quite good! Despite the effects I still hear a warm voice with a good feel for timing.
In this track your voice fits perfectly, it's giving it exact the right tone /ambiance. Well done!, also for the lyrics with a story in it.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Science and Nature by Bioscape
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on FatalFuru by Manasha
I can not review them all separate , so I do it this way.
Maybe some tracks still need a little more mastering and tweaking, but nevertheless all of them are high-class in the beginning.
Keep busy my sisters,
Greetz
on Damnation by JoneIsArt
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Through The Reflection by Nightingale
Especialy when those distorted guitars kicks in, loved it!
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Ken Cries by DextDee
A well-intentioned advice:
Undress your track slowly and fade out for instance the bass-, drum- or melodyline. Then you get a much smoother end of your track(s)
Greetz,
Djinn XS
on Ill Be Standing by DJDuaneWoods
Greetz
Djinn XS