Really good tune and you have a good voice but i think you pronounce your words too clearly and true to their original form. that sounds crazy but if you 'urbanized' ur words a little it might sound more radio friendly
I can see what ur saying but I wouldnt have another way of pronouncing my words, english is not my first language and I don´t have a lot of contact with an ¨urban¨ type of english... could you show me what you mean?
on Got me going Crazy Demo by Dannii