ahh yea, had a little trouble mixxing the vocals. but thnx for the compliment. Apprecite it. And that was my mission; to carry out a specific message. Anyways thnx for the review!
Like usual, nice one man. This definitely makes people feel their stress is gone. Sounds like some mellow/meaningful vocals should be put on this one. -Peace
You have an artistic flow man, but you need to put emphasis at the right moments to give emotion to this. I can tell you dont have the best mic, try addin some fx effects to your vocals to clear em up a bit. Also, some of you lines might make people look away, just gotta prove you mean it.. -Peace man
This has good potential man, like cartoonbomb said, the snares stick out some. I think if you added some finger snaps and/or claps, this could be big w/ the right vocals. Just some helpful criticism. -Peace
Yo man, this beat has it. You may not know exactly what i mean when i say this instrumental Actually takes me to another place.. perhaps you do. First song i have ever made favorite. Keep your creation. -Peace
This is it man. Likin it a lot. Gets a little repetitive tho. If you added another pause with the laugh sample, then dropped the whole thing down to a slower tempo with a Real deep bass, less snares, etc., this would be crazy. A good crazy, ha. Keep it up
-Peace
I like your stuff man, unique. Though there are times when i cant keep noddin my head. If you got the sequence together so there was no 'skip' while nodding, and a few more switch ups maybe, you'd have somethin addicting no doubt. Keep em comin man. -Peace
I like this one a lot man, good pace and rhythm. I agree with Nuckinfutz about how you should change it up. I think you could drop the volume and/or treble and maybe double up the sample when the bass comes in. You could even have a pause without the sample and drop back in. Just a tip. -Peace
True lyrics man, and with a real nice flow. Im with kasper on takin out complicated tho. The rap explains the title and the beat is good, although you could still switch it up to really set the mood. This you on the mic too? Either way its smooth. -Peace
Good track man. Love the way you work the intro in. Gets a little repetitive after awhile, but laid back enough that it doesn't matter too much. Very nice. -Peace
This gets you straight into the zone man. Love the way you break it down to start off. Not too much variety with vocals, but enough to keep it flowin strong. I really like this man. -Peace
I like this beat, it's smooth. Only suggestion i have is to change the bass and/or hihats, or even introduce a new sound after you switch it up half way through like you did. -Peace
Your description is too hyped. This is more like a monologue man, you need to add some more sounds. Btw, dont explain how little you are, it makes people uninterested in your work, and also your name needs some fitting if you understand me
I understand...I just named it "Your Game" because it was the main theme of the vocals that I used to have in this song. And I understand that adults may not think that kids have good work. And I know that i'm not very good at descriptions for songs...But Monologue? I think I had plenty of samples running, but what I think is sometimes different from what someone else does. Thanks for the review anyway.
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