thanks bro hop i did it justice i was thinkin what else to add to it and jus tryin different things in it at the moment and i think its the first time i actuli got vocals in time
If you don't take critism well, please do not read: This is just an opinion.
Singing was tight until about half way through the female sounding vocals say, "Close your eyes" and afterward. Too much effect. Beats tight. Try to talk your vocals out a little more and a little less rapping. It'll allow people to feel what your saying rather then trying to listen to what your saying through your flow.
Just my opinion. With no changes (C), with the changes I suggested... (B to a B+)
thanks for the review i really appreciate it...and i do agree with u i was thinking the same but i wasnt sure but i came out with another new song called "i get money" go check it out n let me know wat u think...thnx
I really like the track and what you did with the chorus. The vocals are offbeat but the way you cut them up it doesn't sound bad. It sounds like its chopped & screwed!
Also do you think the beat would fit the lyrical content of one of my other acapellas more (if you like them) like "Can We Get Down" or "Just As Good"? Check them out!
The track is live... I'd love to hear it with the lyrics in proper timing... If u cant lock'em in, send me a sample of the track and I'll put them in time for you. Good job, tho!
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Singing was tight until about half way through the female sounding vocals say, "Close your eyes" and afterward. Too much effect. Beats tight. Try to talk your vocals out a little more and a little less rapping. It'll allow people to feel what your saying rather then trying to listen to what your saying through your flow.
Just my opinion. With no changes (C), with the changes I suggested... (B to a B+)
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Also do you think the beat would fit the lyrical content of one of my other acapellas more (if you like them) like "Can We Get Down" or "Just As Good"? Check them out!
I enjoyed it.
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