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Diggin it. Everybody forgetting about drums these days. You do em top notch.

Joint is bangin. Diggin the arrangement

I like it. Nice mood. The drums mess me up and draw me in. I was lost in thought when i hit play, when beat kicked it took my focus. I think the vocals are a lil low, but still can clearly hear. Nice work.

Lotta potential right here. I'm liking this loop sound and rhythm wise. Instrument introduced at 1:03 not so much, it alienates me. Maybe simply use a different drum but same pattern or go HEAVY on the bass, for those 8 bars. I like it, i like the simplicity. Would have wrote to it, if there was a download option. Keep doin you man, sounds good.

lol you went nuts on this. I can tell you had fun with it. Keep doin you man, you do it in spades.

Nice. I like the stutter, added alot of flavor. Then the hook right there starring you in the face. At start of verse two, flip or rewrite those 4 bars. I'm thinking you had that in mind, since its the name of the track.
Nice track. Keep doin you.

Feeling it. Going to write a verse for this.

Was feeling it. Cant put my finger on why. But im feeling it. Wrote off a hook and verse to this. Now you have a reason to finish this beat.

Will record it in morning, once i get home.

Hit me if you want the first copy keith89115@yahoo.com

A head nodder for sure. The way the drums were done, sound sick. Just melds so well. Nicely done.

Id write to this beat. just send it on over keith89115@yahoo.com

Forget the ifs and maybes. I already got a hook. Going to write off a verse once I get home. Then send it back within 2 days.

The drums man. Damn nice. Who ever did the drums is a beast. Shit knocks raw as hell.

I liked that its distorted. Carries over your rock roots to me. If that indeed is your roots, hell if i know lol.

Actually feeling it. Ive listened to this track on the original beat and remix. Gotta say i like your version better. The vocals just pop so much more on this.

Like how you made the beat ride the syllables, for most part. Sounds as if they wrote it to this.

Feeling it. Something about it pulls on my emotions. Id write original piece for this. Just send it on over keith89115@yahoo.com

Tempo and drum set is right up my lane. Already got the melody and hook in my head "cant always have what you want".

I like this beat. Love how it slams back on the loop. Im normally against vocal samples as part of a beat. But it sounds very well done here. I dont understand the rapper though.

Id do original material for this. Just send the beat over to keith89115@yahoo.com
Theme will be "cant always have what you want". What comes to my mind atleast.

You the truth man. Hands down one my favs on this site.

Love the way you write the bars man. Then the flow is top notch.
You bring a oldschool feel from the bar structure. But infused with how newer acts are sounding, far as the flow.

Need to work on production man. Don't look for someone to do it, learn it. While they come to you. Knowing the production, simply makes you write even better.

Always strive to learn more. Day you think you have it all, is the day you fall.

Ill jump on whatever track. If you care to test the waters keith89115@yahoo.com just send it on over. Then I'll show you how to do proper voice overs, with no equipment.

Feelin it. Send it on over keith89115@yahoo.com

Ill rip this and send it back same day. Written no freestyle.

Im not a producer. I just been doing this long enough, to pick up on things. That producers tell me about.

A fake snare is a snare that is not part of the tempo per say. Like normally the snare drives the tempo/BPM.

A fake snare, is just a quickly done double snare. Where one of the hits, doesnt land on the tempo. Yet it sounds right and fills in the beat.
I call it fake, because I do not need to hit that snare. In order to remain on beat. I could stutter a word on it, but I dont need to.
So if it was at first "boom boom snare, boom, snare" Its now "boom boom snare, boom, snare snare" Or how ever it ends up sounding good to you.

You cant sing lol. I can tell you had fun with it though. Try pulling it from your gut. Dont heave your chest. Expand your stomach, then push that up to draw the voice. Dont use your vocal box to draw out the words. Use your gut.
If you trying to go serious with it atleast.

Second verse. The adlibs are flat, needs some persona like first verse.
Should use the intro to break in the mindframe. dj?

Sounds good though, keep doin you.

Like how you made each sound so profound.
But at same time, I think thats whats wrong with it.

I feel a fake snare or just 1 more sound, would make it more fluid. But don't go crazy.
Super slow as is. Sorta like if I hit this beat, Id want my voice to be chopped and screwed.
I indeed like it though.

Get at me if you re-tool this, then want written lyrics for it. keith89115@yahoo.com

Feeling it. Ill write to this. Hit ya back in 2 days tops.
I might take the part I like best, then loop it though.
Which is how the intro is.

I like the rock back and forth feel.
Already wrote out 8bars. Probably record it later this morning.

Was feeling it. So I thru it in my freestyle rotation. Ended up writting to it instead.

Rapped over the girl. Dont have it memorized. Will send you what i have, email me keith89115@yahoo.com
Then if you like it. Send me it without the voice. Then Ill send you the pella, with voice overs, and adlibs. Then re add her voice. Ill also adlib her on separate track.
Then let everybody else hear it.

On point. Style remind me of Tech-n9ne, cept im feelin what you talking about more. Especially the blue.
Hook is bangin. Fx on it is tight.

"You noddin your head, you just dont like to nut" haha Cold ass line, best i heard in minute. Reference to you name. Then its like "Stop hatin, you know you noddin your head. Stop waitin and get on it. Yous about to nut boy" haha.

Keep doin you. Soundin good.

Was feeling it. Till that nigga tried to sing lol. Pull it from your gut, not your lungs/vocal box.
Besides that nice track, I love my trees too. Id like to submit written verse for this. You know it need one more verse.
Dext Dee a beast with the beats.
I like the persona. You sell yourself nicely.
Broke mans Hennessy, what you like E&J? haha
805 cali/702. Hit me at keith89115@yahoo.com

Love that old school feel. Even if it is eastcoast old school sounding. Im diggin it.
Reminds me of some oldschool wu-tang.

Liked it when you started scratchin it up. Shoulda went farther and harder with that. maybe get a new sound set for the scratching.

Joint is nice. Feelin it.

Sounds weird, but i think thats why im feelin it.
Far as smokin. If this a smoke track, then im smokin with aliens lol. Far as the feeling it gives off to me.
Keep it movin, keep doin you.

"Since bow wow hit puberty" Straight out the mouth of Ludacris, in one his many hot freestyles. Which dont really make sense, since you yourself are 17. 17-13=4 years old.

Much less predictable. Far as the words.

I dig it, took a min for the hook to work on me. Likin the flow change ups.
Was expecting atleast a punchline or simile in hook, since you said "one of my more lyrical joints" But shit was straight.
If you coulda got that style at 2:43 in part of the intro, as a sample. Woulda grabbed me from the rip. I liked that style, ran the beat nice. Chopstick type flow, diggin it.
Keep doin you. Im feelin it.