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lol the beginning sounds like those sneaky comedies, lol but then it beocmes mature and like a true song, but to be honest the vocals should be a little more clearer.... man i hate but also love honest critics ...sorry man...

Nice guitar and beats although, to be honest your vocals are a little off tone... man that's hard to say... but yea good job

beats are good, liking the pad like synths... vocals are a lil loud... beats get better as the song goes on, loving the fx's! Synths at the end are good and the ending is classic, amazing work, well done!

Can tottally hear this in the club... good work

Nice piano... vocals are not me cuz i aint what you're spitting lol but good work...

Sounds like a story's being told... not thats a bad thing... its a good thing, people can put nice lyrics in there, actually sounds like a great duo with a male and female vocalist... nice work :)

Great drums vocals are so rasta... nice organs... loving the hihats... great work... very solid

Nice sample, the vocals dont go too well, lol the good ol fog horn eh woo! great track... although the drums (not the sample) are a lil weak to be DnB, put more of a snap to the snare, and a deeper kick to the bass kick, but like i said, great song...

Even from the beginning the vocals are good, spitting good, great beats, u sell ur own stuff, if not u shuld do it guy, really nice track, although i (enphasis I) foudn the vocals a lil loud... but great through and through...

The beats are like muted a lil, give em more punch and snap... but the hihats are good, nice synth loving the lead up(s)... great work though

nice relaxing theme... pads are nice as well... maybe a sax quitely in the background? or some jazzy instruments..

nice relaxing theme to it, although not my type of music... great work though, nicely constructed...

Nice drums man, the louder synths are a lil random, but the jazzy feel is funky and all but i think thats for another song man lol, but great work, rather keep to one synth, people like a good melody, people cant follow this so jus keep tone melody... or two as long as people can sing or hum to it :) peace

but the vocalsa re way quieter compared to the music... but liking the msuic great tunes, well done :)

OOOO nice bass man, thats sick, liking the mc lol OM GOODNESS where u get that fog horn you have to tell me please!!! lol i have 16 000 loops and thats the loop ive been looking for for the last 6 months...

Nice beats and rythm and i love the guitar, didn't like the bra_pitch_synth but trust me man it can only get better from here on... when I started ...wow it was disgusting, but now i've gotten to the point where I want to start trying to seel my music lol, but that won't come yet, but hey you never know with music... great work, nicely organized

liking the spit, bascially an overall good song, well done

It was the track itself that overpowered the vocals, but still a great guitar playing!

Nice beats, great work!

Nice stuff man, nice gutair, keep on keeping on!

really dark and mysterious, sounds kinda like the child eater chase from Pan's Labrynth (just the dark atmosphere), liking those weird noises, but yea DJvex has got it, it's a little all over the place... nice bass lines as well, I'm actually thinking of putting more distorted baslines in my work, but i need to know how to make a heavy bass melody without it affecting the whole songs...

lol it's like understand sounds, like you're watching someone swimming with fish lol, great work though, liking it!

Amazing voice man! lol with a better mic you'd gotten better quality... but even so this song is amazing, congrates and keep on keeping on...

Has a dark feeling but major atmosphere, is that a whip i hear lol, great work

Great work, but the vocals could be a little louder... nice beat!