THIS IS AWESOME. I love the wobble and the vox samples "SAY WHAT AGAIN!" I love that movie. Real creative on this one. nice work! .. downloading this... and i dont download much off this site..
you have improved so much, just a couple of things about the track... the strings dont complement the piano... i think you just take out the strings all together... theres too much going on at some points... i would like to sample those piano sounds tho... you are def improving.. keep it up
This review made my day.,and this day iss "effed"..cuz it gave me hope in a way..that in lesss than a year i have come so far, so imagine where i could be when im in my twenties, cuz im only a sophmore in high school, loll...and it came from someone who does have a truly professional sound., and somene whos been beside me the whole time, got tons of respect for that..and i sort of agree, it juss sounded sorta empty withoutt themm(strings) ... But yea juaa hmu wit that email and ill mail them too you..no problems on thatt..
Maybe when i gett a tad better we can collab lmaoo, actually i have a questionn, but that can waiit..
everything is off beat it seems... i dont get the change up either man... try to just make drum beats first... listen to one of your favorite hip hop tracks, figure out the BPM and try to recreate the drums.. JUST the drums.. then build from there! keep workin it will come
real epic beat... i love everything about this.. from the melody to the drum work... someone needs to hop on the mic and kill this... those vox you used are crazy.. really nice work here man
im feelin this, you remind me of Immortal Technique, you sound similar. Beat and vocals go hand in hand... the only thing I could say for improvement is to get a better mic to get better quality vocals. But I understand equipment is expensive as hell! nice work keep it up man
thankx man i apreciate your constructive criticism. immortal technique huh thats a first.i feel u on the mix wise cuz im a baby in the mixing game..u should of heard my vocals with the mic i had before i had a blue snowball edition,it suk major.and now that i just bought myself this mxl v900 and only for a $100 so no matter what i think for that price this is as good as its guna get..thankx again and u stay up bro.
nice beat man, i like the message throughout the song too... i saw your forum post... check my profile out and have a listen to our tracks, i think you'll like what you hear
Nice review :) Thank you ! i play with the swing at 90% for the beat. A quick made production, just for the love of the loop. The vocals are from a looperman members.
u know what it is homie. i finish writing to the beat u sent me, i just have to get to recording it. had a couple other im working on in front of it. but i will get it done.
hey man, nice song here but here are some things to think about fixing...
-the timing in your rap is off at some points, but JUST slightly
-when you have the other songs come in, cut your beat, or make it so that the other songs are in the same tempo as your beat, i found it hard to stay focused when i heard the other songs over top your beat. so you could just cut your beat out while you play those, then bring it back after and fade it out
thats about it man. i like the song, the piano melody is real nice. keep it up
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-the timing in your rap is off at some points, but JUST slightly
-when you have the other songs come in, cut your beat, or make it so that the other songs are in the same tempo as your beat, i found it hard to stay focused when i heard the other songs over top your beat. so you could just cut your beat out while you play those, then bring it back after and fade it out
thats about it man. i like the song, the piano melody is real nice. keep it up
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